Alright, gonna write something after so long.

A dream,
Seen by many,

A hope,
lived short;

A spark,
Fueled with sum,

An era,
Lost by force,

Bringing an end to a long strife,
A short lived life,
An end to human rights,

4/10

im sorry low but it dosnt rhyme at all. i know rhymes dont matter but still, it dosnt get into me.

Very nice. Short but sweet. Good depth in meaning.

7.5/10

4/10

im sorry low but it dosnt rhyme at all. i know rhymes dont matter but still, it dosnt get into me.

There are pieces that doesn't rhyme at all. '-'

And ty Losen. ;D

Great.

requiescat in pace