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5 vote(s) since February 9, 2012 3:57 PM

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Topic: The Day the Moon Cried by Luna

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Posted on February 9, 2012 3:57 PM

5 thumbs up

lunar_cry, The Beautiful Pacifist of True Sight

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I'm not really that good at writing poems. Scratch that I suck at it. :tongue

Anyway without further ado (whatever that is) here we go.

The Day the Moon Cried
by Maria Luna

The day the moon cried
A girl sits by the side
Her knees near her chest
Her hand outstretched
Ignored by passersby
Trash in their eyes

She believes she's useless
Garbage and needless

She creates delusions
To ease her mind
She tries to deny the pain
Of the world that's unkind

Her hunger echoes
Like a dragon that bellows
She picks up the plastic beside
Inhaling the solvent inside
Trying to forget the hunger
Why did she receive God's anger?

She has lived for nine years
With endless tears
She waits for death's kiss
Hoping he won't miss

She wonders if it was a sin
For her to have ever been

She's needless
Useless
Garbage
Repeating these words
Believing this adage
Until the day the moon died

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Posted on February 9, 2012 4:29 PM

crazymonkey3, The Dark Kid of Death

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This reminds me of soul eater's moon, and medusa- the girl

anyways its pretty good. thumb :D

Special thanks to Edeath.

Posted on February 9, 2012 9:31 PM

danahachai, The Radiant Saint

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Is that about you, Luna-chan? Because it's fantastic. ^.^

Thumbed.

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Posted on February 10, 2012 1:10 AM

lunar_cry, The Beautiful Pacifist of True Sight

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Thanks.

Dana it's about the story I told you the other day. Maybe I'll tell you the whole story of what happened in those three weeks one of this days.

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Posted on February 11, 2012 12:28 PM

teonaruto, The Respected Medic of the Ancestors

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i like it. i don't know if your name is luna, but you find something about the moon. maybe this is your inspiration source. whatever, the moonlight can hide powerfull sources, and you find one: the art.

Posted on February 11, 2012 3:58 PM

lunar_cry, The Beautiful Pacifist of True Sight

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teonaruto wrote:

i like it. i don't know if your name is luna, but you find something about the moon. maybe this is your inspiration source. whatever, the moonlight can hide powerfull sources, and you find one: the art.

Yup my name is Luna. Maria Luna.

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Posted on February 27, 2012 7:24 PM

eDeath, The Raging Commander of the Honoo

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lunar_cry wrote:

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Yup my name is Luna. Maria Luna.

well thumb up for luna again i love this poem and in my country luna mean moon :amused

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Posted on February 28, 2012 1:40 AM

lunar_cry, The Beautiful Pacifist of True Sight

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Thanks eDeath. Haha. And yeah I know that my name means moon. :laugh

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