Well I can't sleep again so I'm just gonna post this! How I hate February.

This is a continuation of the poem "The Day the Moon Cried."

Also inspired by the words of one of my favorite artist Otep "Art Saves."

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but I can't vote sry

Wow lunar this is amazing. 9/10

i have the feeling you are stealing them from another site. They are so original and touching. You should publish some in a news paper or idk. But you really have a talent to this.

'She wonders if death was more painful'

Have you been sleeping during your English lessons? It's "were".

Other than that, it is a decent poem. It scores a 8.

'She wonders if death was more painful'

Have you been sleeping during your English lessons? It's "were".

Not necessarily (actually I'd wouldn't even use 'were' in that case)substituting "were" into that part doesn't sound right anyhow.

Luna-chan, It is very beautifully written, I give you a 9.99/10

Nothing is every perfect

@Scimitaro - Thanks and it's alright.

@Monkeynii-chan - Thanks and no I'm not stealing them from any site.
About publishing it in the newspaper I don't know.

@Rukia - I don't know if you're being a bitch or I'm just overly sensitive these days. But there are ways to say something without being a bitch about it. I'm going to make mistakes in grammar since English is not my native language so I'm not perfect with it. But either way thanks for the rating. Also I'm keeping it as "was" cause it sounds better to me. I made this poem to express something not for my grammar to be analyzed. Butsu butsu iwanai-de!

@Losen - Thanks Losen! Hope you're feeling better!

i said that and i say again: the moon and the moonlight gives you the inspiration. you should make a book with all of your creations called "the art of the moon" or something like this.

Thanks.

I do love my namesake. About the book I don't think that would happen since I can't write that many poems.

just listen the moon, the heart, and your mother =)) (the last part is a joke)

@Scimitaro - Thanks and it's alright.

@Monkeynii-chan - Thanks and no I'm not stealing them from any site.
About publishing it in the newspaper I don't know.

@Rukia - I don't know if you're being a bitch or I'm just overly sensitive these days. But there are ways to say something without being a bitch about it. I'm going to make mistakes in grammar since English is not my native language so I'm not perfect with it. But either way thanks for the rating. Also I'm keeping it as "was" cause it sounds better to me. I made this poem to express something not for my grammar to be analyzed. Butsu butsu iwanai-de!

@Losen - Thanks Losen! Hope you're feeling better!

Actually, you were correct all along - since "death" replaces the pronoun "it", the correct tense is indeed "she wondered if death was more painful". Rukia just like to point pseudo-mistakes in people's writings, that's all.

Well, I'll have to say the same thing I've told Hyon once... I loved your poem, I really did, but I feel the spectrum it covers (even though there's melancholy to it) is somewhat different from what I usually write, so I won't be able to really explore the whole panorama uncovered by it, which does not render it, BY ANY MEANS, a bad poem, quite the contrary. I just lack the "synchrony" with the feelings expressed (since, through my perspective, even though there is a lurid scene depicted, the predominant feeling of the poem is HOPE, while I'm more used to the "dark feeling spectrum") - thus, I'll be only be able to give a rate, without delving into its aspects deeply as I would like to.

My rating is 8.5/10. The poem is great and surely deserving of a thumbs-up.

Thanks Taylor! That really means a lot coming from you!

I've actually read some your work and love them all. Also I think hope will always be a part of me since I've experienced first hand that shadows can only be created with light. Though I believe that people should create their own hope and not wait for it to fall on their laps.

@teonaruto - it took me a while to get the joke.

sorry lunar_cry. and taylor, you will always talk like ryuzaki. L FOREVER!

nice one thumbs from you luna

Thanks.