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Poll: Was it an okay first attempt at a poem?

6 vote(s) since February 14, 2012 10:10 AM

Yeah, actually. It was. (5) (83.33%)
Nup. This stuff is crap. (0) (0%)
In the middle, I reckon. (1) (16.67%)

Topic: A (late) Valentines Day Poem

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Posted on February 14, 2012 10:10 AM

5 thumbs up

danahachai, The Radiant Saint

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I just sent this poem to a friend and I don't usually write poems, but I'm quite fond of this one actually. It's a (late) Valentines Day poem, naturally. (No, it's a Christmas poem. XD)

Love can be like...
Love can be like fireworks, loud and clear.
Like a tiny explosion, when loved ones come near.
A feeling of warmth spreads deeply inside,
And the confessions of love can no longer hide.

Or love can be like blossoms, quiet and shy.
Silently passing secret passions by.
But there is always that time when the truth must come out,
The part within that just wants to shout.

Love may not be showable, but one things for sure.
The heart's true feelings, will always remain pure.

So. How was it? :3
I'm cool with critism and all, but please don't complain about the length. Or the general rhythm. If you read it properly (lol) you'll get the actual flow eventually.

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Posted on February 14, 2012 11:03 AM

teonaruto, The Respected Medic of the Ancestors

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i like it

Posted on February 14, 2012 11:08 AM

LosenFlowers, The Red Blossom of the Kusa

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This is an absolute piece of crap Skye-chan

Spoiler
JKS! I love it, very emotion packed and well written, although to me it sounded like a Christmas poem XD 8/10

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Posted on February 14, 2012 11:12 AM

danahachai, The Radiant Saint

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teonaruto wrote:

i like it

Good to hear. ^.^

@Losen Goddammit! I did not see the spoiler and I thought it was for real. But, thank you anyways. XD

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Posted on February 14, 2012 12:32 PM

Scimitaro, The Dark Wolf of the Phoenix Queen

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I love it it's greath

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Posted on February 15, 2012 10:46 AM

danahachai, The Radiant Saint

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Thanks niisan. ^.^

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Posted on February 15, 2012 11:57 AM

lunar_cry, The Beautiful Pacifist of True Sight

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It's very nice Dana! I liked it a lot. Are you in love Dana? :laugh

Maybe with dudable???? :tongue

Jokes.

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Posted on February 15, 2012 12:03 PM

danahachai, The Radiant Saint

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Nonononononono way! You can't say that! :embarrassed

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Posted on February 15, 2012 12:05 PM

lunar_cry, The Beautiful Pacifist of True Sight

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Haha. Dana's blushing. :tongue

I'm just teasing. I know your heart belong to Justin Biber. Haha.

Jokes. :laugh

Your heart belongs to me! :laugh

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Posted on February 15, 2012 12:08 PM

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danahachai, The Radiant Saint

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That's even worse!

I guess it's true then. We're all pervs at heart. XD

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Posted on February 15, 2012 12:19 PM

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lunar_cry, The Beautiful Pacifist of True Sight

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Haha. Pervy perv!

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Posted on February 15, 2012 1:34 PM

#12

teonaruto, The Respected Medic of the Ancestors

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i have to say one think: amen

Posted on March 4, 2012 11:35 AM

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-ToukenSan, The Flaming Tiger

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Love it :) :amused

Posted on March 4, 2012 11:36 AM

1 thumbs up

#14

danahachai, The Radiant Saint

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@-ToukenSan Thanks!

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Posted on March 4, 2012 12:53 PM

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teonaruto, The Respected Medic of the Ancestors

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your heart belongs to Hugh Jackman :teeth