Well this is my third poem here but this is actually the very first poem I wrote. (I was 12 at the time I think) So the way it's written is kinda crude and raw. I decided to post it after The Day the Moon Cried and Lunar Eclipse because I think those poems make it easier to understand this poem. Although I think only two people in here can fully understand what this poem is about. Now enough with the intro. Let's begin!

(I apologize in advance for any grammatical errors on the paragraph above. My brain is still a little fried at the moment.)

a death poem. the moon is powerful

Woah.... It's so powerful and deep...

It's a fantastic poem, Lunar.

Oh, my god, Luna. This is surely your best poem, in my opinion.

The feelings are so clear and so strong, even upon facing the target transition (I'm not being more specific so I don't spoil the poem by biasing other people into thinking like me, but I think you got what I meant). The way that... feeling is explored and that detachment is expressed surely makes this a great work of art.

I wonder what you've faced on your 12th year in order to write something like this (which is quite a coincidence to my story as well, since my 12th year was the worst one in my life). This is plain brilliant and I lack the adjectives to express it deeper.

I'd so some style changes, but those are personal. I think you are the first person to ever get a 9.5/10 of me with a poem (there was one person that got such grade with a signature, however). I can't reiterate how this poem is marvellous by itself, with no need for further explanation. Great job. =D

@teonaruto - Thanks. Haha. Of course the moon is powerful. It's the best damn thing in the world.

@Dana - Thanks Dana. You're actually one of the persons I wanted to show this poem to. I'm glad you liked it.

@Taylor - Whoah. I never thought I'd get such a high rating from you. My confidence is increasing. Haha.

As for what happened to me when I was 12 I'll tell you. Nothing really. Nothing extraordinary happened to me when I was twelve. It was just during that time I was able to express my feelings. If you really want to know about my past just read the other two poems and you'll get it. I'm sure you will. Here's a clue it all started when I was 9.

wow Luna-chan, you say'd I'm better at writing poems than you but now I have to say your better than me, or at least at this category of poems

@Scimitaro - Thanks. But sadly I can only write these kinds of poems.

@Scimitaro - Thanks. But sadly I can only write these kinds of poems.

you have no reasons to be sad

as you saw I write sad love poems so we are smwere in the same area