Life as a poem
By Scimitaro

Life is like a poem…
One that began long ago,
It began when the word began
And it will never end…

In life is about many things,
About money, people and feelings.
I write about feelings and emotions,
So I wrote you this poem…

A poem about the friend we have,
And the ones we will make.
We care aobout our friend
We even love someone who is our friend.

We continue to love that person
Even if she* doesn’t love us…
We want to stay in the background,
Because if we’ll not be forgotten we’ll be happy…

But…there are also friend we like,
Friends that are important to us
People who we want near us…
And I am happy to say,
That you are one of them

It's Scimitaro! 8/10 for you.

It's Scimitaro! 8/10 for you.

all I can say is that your poem if better that this one
maybe I will post another one later if noone argues with this

Interesting poem, very nice. Quite enjoyable to read 7/10