Topic: Smile ~ by Dana

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  Posted on February 20, 2012 8:53 AM
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danahachai, The Radiant Saint

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Hey everyone. Another quick poem I wrote, a bit rough seeing as I was in quite a bad mood.

Your smile is wondrous,
It clears the cloudiest skies.
It stops even the most sorrowful cries,
Happiness engulfing it all.

If I stumble and fall,
You'd be there to pick me up and help me through.
Guide me in the darkened labyrinth,
As if I never knew.

So if you ever feel down,
Don't you dare frown.
And let the sunlight shine through.

As summer comes to an end,
Your smile too comes to a halt.

Your eyes fade to black,
The colours disappear,
And your once joyful heartbeat becomes impossible to hear.

I can't pull you through,
There's nothing I can do.
So I'll let your body float away.

But I haven't lost hope,
I still wish and pray,
That one day, I'll see you smile again.

Spoiler

One of my greatest friends died in a car accident this morning, and losing him is like someone throwing my heart on the floor and watching it shatter.


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  Posted on February 20, 2012 9:37 AM
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LosenFlowers, The Red Blossom of the Kusa

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It is very nice, 8/10. Thumbs UP!

Im sorry to hear about your friend. Hope you'll feel better soon. Don't forget, the clan is always there if you need some support.
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  Posted on February 20, 2012 9:41 AM
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danahachai, The Radiant Saint

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Thanks Losen-kun. :)
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