Topic: Gaichuu Clan

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  Posted on February 28, 2014 at 4:47 PM
#1
asastreja, The Ruthless Tactician of the Seishin

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Sorry for the delay. But here is the Gaichuu Clan of the Chikyu region

Gaichuu means "pest" in Japanese.
Village Story: The Gaichuu are direct descendants of the royal Konchuu clan. First started by the Royal Guardians Konchuu Kumo and Umi Ikka, as means to finally get separated from the Konchuu and Umi clans. The Separation brought much chaos to the Region. Kumo and Ikka gave away their names and took the names Gaichuu Kumo and Kawa Ikka. The Gaichuu started out weak, but as a Royal Guard Kumo fought out land on the Konchuu Village. And the Konchuu villagers rebelled, and now the Gaichuu Clan is almost on equal rights with the Konchuu, but the Gaichuu are losing pure-blooded ninjas, thus losing pure Konchuu powers, so the ninjas are trying to impersonate the Konchuu powers. They are trying to regain those powers by stealing one of two great relics of the Konchuu.

Village Item:

Sacred wings of the Gaichuu

Energy Required:
None

Changes all agility energy in skills to random energy. Can only be equipped by members of the Gaichuu Clan.

Class List:
Passive, Instant
Cooldown:
None


  Posted on February 28, 2014 at 4:47 PM
#2
asastreja, The Ruthless Tactician of the Seishin

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Joined: January 22, 2011
Gaichuu Youhei
(Pest Mercenary)
Hp: 80; Specialty: Assassination
Backstory: She is one of the last Gaichuu, who is pure Konchuu blooded. However, her father wants to lose all connections to the Konchuu, thus is trained to be powerless, and is trained to be a stealthy assasin. She joined the fighting force of the Gaichuu ant the early age of 16. She is what her people call one of the weakest, but one of the most skilled warriors of her clan.
Personality: She is arrogant and cocky near her friends, but cold and proffessional when in battle and in presence of her superiors. However, she is defrosting.
Appearance: Youhei is an 18 year old woman, she is clad completely in black garbs, and has a black scarf covering hew mouth. She has black shoulder-length hair and almost glowing green eyes.
Fighting Style: Youhei fights using a poison tipped knife, her battle style is using stealth and analyzing her position in the shadows, and when she stealthfully poisons and slows down her enemy, she goes berserk in killing the enemy. Her green eyes are her only sign of being a runaway pure blood, her ancestor ability as one of the main family descendants is revitalization through poisoned blood of enemies.

Hide

Energy Required:

Youhei afffects herself with Hide for 1 turn. During this time Youhei is invulnerable, and any enemy that attacks her during this time is affected with Mercenary Swipe. Next turn Mercenary Swipe can be used.

Class List:
Tactic, Instant
Cooldown:
1


Level 1: Doesn't self affect Mercenary Swipe.
This skill only has two levels
Skill Picture: Youhei is half covered by a shadow with her knife, and both of her eyes glowing.
Effect: Youhei hides and prepares to strike, and defends by using her poison knife. Mercenary Swipe can't be used without Hide, because of the short range of her knife.

Mercenary Swipe

Energy Required:

Youhei affects an enemy with a Poison affliction infinitely dealing 15 damage each turn and reducing all non-affliction damage by 10.

Class List:
Physical, Instant
Cooldown:
1


Level 2: Deals 10 affliction damage and reduces damage by 5.
Level 1: Doesn't reduce damage.
Skill Picture: Quickly swipes a poison tipped knife.
Effect: With the little time she has to strike, she quickly swipes her knife, barely damaging the enemy, but still affecting him/her with deadly toxins.

Shadow Uppercut

Energy Required:

Youhei deals 20 piercing physical damage. Triggers Bloodthirst.

Class List:
Physical, Instant
Cooldown:
1


Level 2: Costs one more energy
Level 1: Deals 15 piercing damage.
Skill Picture: Youhei coming out of a bush to stab an enemy.
Effect: Stabs an enemy, causing bleeding, triggering her lust for blood.

Bloodthirst

Energy Required:
None

Youhei is healed 5 health points for each enemy with a Poison Affliction. Heals 5 more health for every enemy affected with Mercenary Swipe. Is triggerred by Shadow Uppercut or any offensive item.

Class List:
Passive, Instant
Cooldown:
None


Level 1: Doesn't heal extra for Mercenary Swipe.
Skill Picture: Blood is seen in a reflection in Youhei's eye.
Effect: Her family's ability is regenerating through poisoned blood, be it friend or foe, but Youhei only uses it on foes.
  Posted on February 28, 2014 at 4:48 PM
#3
asastreja, The Ruthless Tactician of the Seishin

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Joined: January 22, 2011
Gaichuu Inori
(Pest Monk)
Hp:90; Specialty: Assassination
Backstory: Inori is not a pure-blood Konchuu, however he gained a very thin physique as a defining feature of the branch of the Konchuu he's from. This makes him a valuable warrior, but he decided to become a Gaichuu Royal Monk, those who pray to Kumo, as they believe he is a deity for rebelling against the Konchuu, however in times of war, the monks are required to fight, and Inori is a powerful warrior thus becoming a guard of the Daimyo.
Personality: Inori is a kind person. This hinders him in battle, he is apologetic, leaving him self open. He is like a big brother mentor to Youhei in times of war, but it sometimes seems the other way around, as he needs to learn to be more ruthless in battle.
Appearance: Inori is a 23 year old man, who wears a green long-sleeved robe. He has short and messy brown hair and kind brown eyes. A defining feature is that he is extremely thin.
Fighting Style: He uses two short scythes, using them gracefully, until using a single shred attack. He uses his thin body as a battle feature, letting him avoid attacks easier. He also uses minor healing abilities which grow stronger as he prays.

Praying Dance

Energy Required:

Inori affects himself and an enemy with Praying Dance. For 3 turns, the enemy takes 10 piercing physical damage and Inori gains a Praying Dance charge. Allows Slaying Shred.

Class List:
Physical, Aura
Cooldown:
3


Level 2: Lasts 2 turns.
Level 1: Doesn't gain Praying Dance charges.
Skill Picture: Inori's silhouette is seen gracefully swinging his scythes.
Effect: He swings his scythes damaging his enemy, building up momentum for Slaying Shred and preparing a stronger Prayer Blooms.

Slaying Shred

Energy Required:

Inori deals 30 piercing physical damage to one enemy.

Class List:
Physical, Instant
Cooldown:
1


Level 2: Has a cooldown of 2
Level 1: Deals 25 piercing damage.
Skill Picture: Inori cross-slashes an enemy, his scythes covered in blood.
Effect: After building momentum Inori may switch to another enemy and deliver an incredibly swift and powerful slash.

Prayer Blooms

Energy Required:

Inori heals 5 Hp to all allies. Heals 5 more for each Praying Dance charge. Removes all Praying Dance charges.

Class List:
Tactic, Instant
Cooldown:
4


Level 2: Heals 0 Hp initially.
Level 1: Has a cooldown of 5.
Skill picture: A bloom sprouts in Inori's hand.
Effect: He fills a seed with restorative energy, and while doing Praying dance he creates more. Why a seed because until it sprouts and releases the restoralive pollen, he has time to finish his attack, and give the seeds to allies.

Sleek Physique

Energy Required:
None

Inori takes 10 less damage from ranged skills, but takes 5 more from melee skills.

Class List:
Passive, Instant
Cooldown:
None


This skill only has one level.
Skill Picture: A flying arrow misses Inori.
Effect: The remains of pure Konchuu blood. He is frail, but very sleek thus making avoiding much easier, yet a smaller hit would hurt a lot.
  Posted on February 28, 2014 at 4:48 PM
#4
asastreja, The Ruthless Tactician of the Seishin

Contribution: 141 (118 + 23)
Joined: January 22, 2011
Gaichuu Nisemono
(Pest Imposter)
Hp: 70; Specialty: Assassination
Backstory: Daimyo of the Gaichuu. Great granddaugther of Kumo. She had a hard life. She was one of the most skilled descendants of Kumo who gained her powers from her mother. At age 7 she was powerful enough to murder assassins who tried to assault her when she was travelling to the Kawa Village. Her father sensed the threat, so he tried to kill Nisemono, however Nisemono killed her father in self-defense. An exception was made and her mother was made Daimyo, because Nisemono was only 12 at the time. But the Konchuu murdered her mother too. So at the age of 15 she was forced to become daimyo, and she is one for 20 years already.
Personality: Her dark past has left her very cold and snobbish. A natural-born leader. She cares for her village and is kind when matters concern it. But that's just a facade. Only few actually know how ruthless she is.
Appearance: She is a beautiful woman of 35 years.She wears a long black dress and some golden accessories. She has elbow length pitch-black hair, with a gray stripe at the left. She has piercing blue eyes. Her expression is always like she is apathic and very strict. A scar is seen next to the right side of her lips. It was left by her father.
Fighting Style: Nisemono uses thick needles, giving away speed but gaining insane precision. The needles are actually giant hornet stingers.

Aim and Brace

Energy Required:

Nisemono gains 15 points of damage reduction for one turn. Next turn Squall of Memories can be used.

Class List:
Tactic, Instant
Cooldown:
2


Level 2: Grants 10 damage reduction.
Level 1: Has a cooldown of 3.
Skill Picture: Nisemono holds her stingers and looks up to the sky.
Effect: She prepares for a powerful attack, while staying safe

Squall of Memories

Energy Required:

Nisemono deals 20 ranged damage to all enemies and affects them all with a Poison Affliction infinitely, dealing 5 affliction damage each turn. Renews.

Class List:
Ranged, Instant
Cooldown:
2


Level 2: Has a cooldown of 3 and deals 10 ranged damage.
Level 1: Deals 5 ranged damage.
Skill Picture: A silhouette in the sky and bloody needles on the ground.
Effect: She has an infinite amount of the stingers so she throws them to damage all enemies.
(The name reflects on her past, and squall is a type of storm, which includes big chunks of hail(Just noting))

Ruthless Assault

Energy Required:

Nisemono deals 10 affliction damage and affects an enemy with a Poison Affliction for 2 turns. That enemy can't deal more than 15 damage.

Class List:
Physical, Instant
Cooldown:
1


Level 2: The damage cap is 20.
Level 1: 5 affliction damage is dealt.
Skill Picture: An enemy with a stinger in their heart and Nisemono is glaring.
Effect: This poison weakens an enemy's mental state, thus Nisemono breaks his mind easily.

Flight

Energy Required:
None

If Nisemono is affected by any effect except damage she gains 10 destructible defence. When the defence is destroyed the effect is also removed.

Class List:
Passive, Instant
Cooldown:
None


Only one level.
Skill Picture: Nisemono floats away from danger.
Effect: She braces and when hit, she automatically floats away.
(This includes stuns, affliction, removal effects, etc.)
  Posted on March 1, 2014 at 3:21 PM
#5
asastreja, The Ruthless Tactician of the Seishin

Contribution: 141 (118 + 23)
Joined: January 22, 2011
BUMP. Please do something, rate, comment,...
  Posted on March 1, 2014 at 5:05 PM
#6
godperica, The Untouchable Swordsman of the Ancestors

Contribution: 283 (245 + 38)
Joined: March 20, 2010
The skills and the characters are fine, but the Gaichuu Inori seems totally overpowered to me, i mean, massive damage and massive heal? Too op, good concept but just broken, also, i'm struggling to understand you here :

"Sleek PhysiqueEnergy Required: None Inori takes 10 less damage from ranged skills, but takes 5 more from physical skills."

Do you mean melee there?

Also, Gaichuu Youhei, in her 2nd skill, mercenary swipe will only be usable if the enemy attacks her during hide?

Overall, it's good, but some things need to be corrected, atleast to me it's a bit confusing 1 or 2 things like I explained above
Latest Character ->Suttikī Osuushi

  Posted on March 2, 2014 at 9:16 AM
#7
asastreja, The Ruthless Tactician of the Seishin

Contribution: 141 (118 + 23)
Joined: January 22, 2011
Yeah by physical I meal melee. And no, mercenary swipe will be usable but will also afflict an enemy who attacks her during invulnerablility.

Also, I nerfed Inori a little bit.
  Posted on March 2, 2014 at 11:15 AM
#8
godperica, The Untouchable Swordsman of the Ancestors

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Seems a bit better now ^^ We must take in consideration that a character that heals and deals some damage is pretty much on the verge of being overpowered, with a high damaging skill it's almost a "broken" character
Latest Character ->Suttikī Osuushi

  Posted on March 2, 2014 at 11:47 AM
#9
asastreja, The Ruthless Tactician of the Seishin

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Thanks, I'll keep that in mind!!