Topic: Seishin Karasu Typo

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  Posted on May 11, 2014 at 4:17 AM
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tanzoe, Doctor

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Brother of the Toraji, Daimyo of the Shishi, Karasu is dedicated to restoring the Seishin name. In his travels he visited the ancient ruins of the Seishin City, and found an forbidden technique that will allow him and his spirit beast, Tengu the Black Prince, to finally restore the Seishin name to its rightful glory

shouldn't it be "A forbidden"
  Posted on May 11, 2014 at 11:11 AM
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Murasaki_Karasu, The Trueborn Savior of the Ancestors

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Also, "brother of the Toraji, Daimyo" should be "brother of Toraji, the daimyo"
  Posted on May 11, 2014 at 11:28 AM
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tanzoe, Doctor

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Murasaki_Karasu wrote:

Also, "brother of the Toraji, Daimyo" should be "brother of Toraji, the daimyo"

yep , that too
  Posted on May 11, 2014 at 1:12 PM
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godperica, The Untouchable Swordsman of the Ancestors

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going minucious on details in Seishin City, and , when you use the word and, it doesn't have a comma before, ever, atleast I think, which should be wrote like

Seishin City and - Not - Seishin city, and
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