Poll: How is the Region? (out of 10)

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 Topic: Region - Nakazora Ranzu: Completed

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  Posted on February 2, 2011 4:58 AM
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DeadSight, The Raging Saint

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REGION SUBMISSION: "Nakazora Ranzu" (Hollowlands) - made by DeadSight
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POST ONE - Chi-No Clan
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Chi-no Clan
”Chi-no” translates roughly to “of blood”

History:
The Chi-no clan has its roots tied close to the “Mizu” clan. The Chi-no derived from the Mizu when their current daimyo, at first known as Mizu Tsuyoi, was outcasted from the Mizu village for developing his own methods of combat, known as “blood curdling” by the Chi-no clan. This style of combat is extremely dangerous, as it utilizes both the user's and enemy's blood and nervous systems; leaving the users open to attack and open to injury. Mizu Tsuyoi founded the Chi-no clan after perfecting his combat prowess, and developing his own new techniques of blood curdling. Mizu Tsuyoi is now known as Chi-no Sakenomi, and his relations with the Mizu clan have become tense.

Members of the Chi-no
Chi-no Sakenomi (Assassination) - Male
Chi-no Hanta (Assassination) - Male
Chi-no Teishi (Disruption) - Female


Characteristics
Chi-no Sakenomi
Sakenomi is dressed in a red magi, fading to black near the bottom. Blood is splattered across the robe and his face. He stares with piercing crimson eyes. - Male

Chi-no Hanta
Hanta wears torn black cloak, with red trimmed across it. At his waist is the hilt of a digger exposed from in front of the cloak. His eyes have two different colors, the right is hazel, as the left is maroon. - Male

Chi-no Teishi
Teishi has two katanas on her back, she is covered in scavenged leather armor from her fallen enemies, each piece bathed in blood. Her eyes are of a deep purple. – Female

Skills

Chi-no Sakenomi - Specialization : Assassination – Health : 120
Blood Craze
Cost – 1 Intelligence, 1 random
Class – Melee, instant.
Cooldown – 2 turns
Effect – Sakenomi kills a target opponent with 25 health or less. This skill ignores invulnerability and bypasses counters. Sakenomi is healed by 25 health and is invulnerable for one turn.

Blood Rush
Cost – 1 Wisdom, 1 Random
Class – Mental, Instant
Cooldown – 4 turns
Effect - For 3 turns; poison afflictions on target opponent deal 5 more damage, the target is immune to friendly drug afflictions, and healing on the target is DECREASED by 5. During this time, Sakenomi takes 5 affliction damage each turn.

Heart Expulsion
Cost – 1 Wisdom, 1 Intelligence
Class – Mental, Aura, Infinite
Cooldown – 2 turns
Effect – Sakenomi slowly kills an opponent’s heart as it is restricted and begins to overwork, forcing itself to death. Every turn target opponent takes 15 affliction damage and is stunned. During this time, poison afflictions on the target deal an additional 10 damage. If Blood Rush is active on the opponent, they take an additional 5 affliction damage per turn for the remainder of Blood Rush. Sakenomi is stunned during this time, and takes 10 affliction damage per turn during this time. THIS SKILL CAN ONLY BE USED ON ONE TARGET AT A TIME. USING THIS SKILL WILL END ITS EFFECTS ON THE FIRST TARGET.

Cold Blooded
Cost - 1 random
Class - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 4 turns
Effect - Sakenomi is invulnerable for 1 turn.

Chi-no Hanta – Specialization : Assassination – Health : 90
Blood Splatter
Cost – 1 agility, 1 random
Class – Melee, Instant
Cooldown – 1 turns
Effect – Hanta cuts viciously at one opponent. Dealing 20 melee damage and disabling heals to one target enemy for one turn.

Blood Infusion
Cost – 1 Wisdom
Class – Tactic, Instant
Cooldown – 3 turns
Effect – THIS SKILL CAN TARGET AN ALLY OR ENEMY. If this skill is used on an ally, that ally ignores all affliction damage for two turns. If this skill is used on an enemy, the target takes 10 affliction damage one turn, and all drug afflictions are removed from the target.

Self Penance
Cost – 1 strength, 1 intelligence
Class – Tactic, Aura
Cooldown – 4 turns
Effect – Hanta targets one ally. Every turn, that ally is healed by 10. Damage dealt to that ally is redirected to Hanta, during this time, if Hanta uses a skill Self Penance will end, Hanta is invulnerable to enemy skills until this skill ends. This skill ends when Hanta dies.

Mark of Blood
Cost – 1 random
Class – Tactic, Instant
Cooldown – 4 turns
Effect – Hanta is invulnerable for one turn.

Chi-no Teishi – Specialization : Disruption – Health : 80
Blood Rot
Cost – 1 intelligence
Class – Mental, Instant
Cooldown - 2 turns
Effect – Teishi targets one enemy, effecting them with a poison affliction. For 2 turns, that enemy takes 10 affliction damage each turn, and melee and ranged damage dealt by that enemy is reduced by 10 damage. That target is affected by Blood Rot permanently.

Regression
Cost – 1 Intelligence, 1 random
Class – Mental, Aura
Cooldown – Infinite
Effect – Teishi affects all enemies effected by Blood Rot with a poison affliction dealing 15 damage each turn permanently. This skill ends when Teishi dies. During this time Teishi takes 10 affliction damage every turn.

Hot Blood
Cost – 1 random
Class – Tactic, Aura
Cooldown – 1 turn.
Effect - Activating this skill toggles it’s effect. When activated. Target ally takes 10 affliction damage every turn and receives one agility energy. Healing effects on that ally are increased by 5. Poison and bleeding afflictions on that ally are increased by 5.

Death Rattle
Cost – 1 random
Class – Tactic, Instant
Cooldown – 4 turns.
Effect – Teishi is invulnerable for 1 turn for every killed enemy.

Clan Item:
Chi-No Dagger of Woe
Cost - 1 strength, 1 random.
Class - Melee, Instant
Cooldown - 3 Turns.
Effect - This skill ignores invulnerability. Target enemy takes 10 piercing damage and takes 10 poison damage each turn for 3 turns. Healing on the target is decreased by 5 during this time.

  Posted on February 2, 2011 4:59 AM
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DeadSight, The Raging Saint

Contribution: 839 (696 + 143)
Joined: January 11, 2011
POST TWO - Mizu Clan
Mizu Clan
”Mizu” translates roughly to “Water”

History:
The Mizu clan has long lived in harmony under the shogunate, desired mainly for their inherited powers over water. Some hold the power of healing using their springs, others find themselves protected by mist, and rarely some are blessed with ice. Each child in the clan holds something special to them, but that has all been threatened with the fall of the shogunate, for many clans have hatred towards the Mizu because of their past "High-seat" under the shogunate due to their healing and protection prowess. War has been brought to the once again.

Members of the Chi-no
Mizu Kori (Disruption) - male
Mizu Kawa (Collaboration) - Female
Mizu Misuto (Assassination) - male


Characteristics
Mizu Kori
Mizu Kori is dressed in a blue robe, etched with white. His face is partially covered by a white balaclava, and both his eyes a light blue.

Mizu Kawa
Mizu Kawa is dressed in the natural Mizu clan’s medical garb. A simple doctrine of a blue robe, overlapped by a white apron stained with blood. Her eyes are a deep blue.

Mizu Misuto
Mizu Misuto is dressed in a full grey cloak, covering his entire body. Where the cloak opens his chest, you can see a gunsteel blue armor protecting him. He too wears a balaclava, but instead it is grey, and his eyes peer with a deep hazel.

Skills
Mizu Kori – Specialization : Disruption – Health : 80
Deep Freeze
Cost – 1 wisdom
Class – Mental, Channelling
Cooldown - N/A
Effect – Kori counters the first mental skill used by an enemy for three turns. This skill ends when a skill is countered. When this skill ends, it begins a cooldown of two turns. This skill cannot be used while active. That target, if countered, is affected by Deep Freeze until frost bite is used.

Permafrost
Cost – 1 Random
Class – Mental, Aura
Cooldown - None
Effect – Kori deals 10 affliction damage to a random opponent, if the target is affected by deep freeze, they will take an addition 15 affliction damage. This skill cannot effect an opponent already effected by Permafrost. The effected opponent is effected by permafrost, dealing 5 affliction damage each turn infinitely.

Frost bite
Cost – 1 wisdom, 1 intelligence
Class – Mental, Instant
Cooldown – 3 turns
Effect – Kori stuns all opponents effected by Permafrost. All effected targets take 20 affliction damage. Permafrost is removed from all targets. Enemies effected by deep freeze take an additional 10 affliction damage.

Ice Armor
Cost – 1 random
Class – Tactic, Instant
Cooldown – 4 turns
Effect – Kori becomes invulnerable for one turn.


Mizu Kawa – Specialization : Collaboration – Health : 80
Baptism of Water
Cost – 1 intelligence, 1 random
Class – Tactic, Channeling
Cooldown – 3 turns
Effect – For two turns, one ally is healed by 15 each turn and 1 burning afflictions and poison afflictions are removed from the target.

Surface Tension
Cost – 1 intelligence
Class – Tactic, Aura
Cooldown – 3 turns
Effect – For two turns, the first enemy melee skill used on Kawa is countered, the countered enemy has melee skills stunned for two turn and takes 5 affliction damage. This skill is invisible to the enemy.

Dragon of the Waves
Cost – 2 Wisdom
Class – Mental, Aura
Cooldown – 5 turns
Effect – Kawa receives a protector of 40 health. Each turn, Kawa’s allies are healed by 10 health and all enemies take 10 affliction damage. This skill ends when Kawa or her protector die.

Riptide
Cost – 1 random
Class – Tactic, Instant
Cooldown – 4 turns
Effect – Kawa becomes invulnerable for one turn.

Mizu Misuto – Specialization : Assassination – Health : 90
Fog
Cost – 1 Intelligence
Class – Mental, Aura
Cooldown – 4 turns
Effect – All enemies are effected by fog. All ranged damage dealt by effected enemies is decreased by 5, this skill ends when Misuto dies.

Condensation
Cost – 1 Wisdom
Class – Mental, Aura
Cooldown – 4 turns
Effect – All enemies effected by fog are now effected by condensation, and fog is removed from effected enemies. All melee damage dealt by effected enemies is decreased by 5, this skill ends when Misuto dies.

Hidden Blade
Cost – 1 agility
Class – Melee, Instant
Cooldown – 1 turn
Effect – Misuto deals 15 piercing melee damage to one enemy. If an enemy is effected by fog, this damage is increased by 15 and the target is stunned. If an enemy is effected by condensation, this damage is instead increased by 25 and ignores invulnerability. This skill removes all fog and condensation effects from the target enemy.

Disappearance
Cost – 1 random
Class – Tactic, Instant
Cooldown – 4 turns
Effect – Misuto becomes invulnerable for one turn.

Clan Item:
Holy Mizu Spring Water
Cost - 2 random
Class - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 4 turns
Effect - Heals target ally for 10 health for two turns, during this time, the target is immune to affliction damage.
  Posted on February 2, 2011 4:59 AM
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DeadSight, The Raging Saint

Contribution: 839 (696 + 143)
Joined: January 11, 2011
POST THREE - Anbeddo Clan
Anbeddo Clan
"Anbeddo" refers to the undead

History:
The history of the Anbeddo clan is shrouded in horror, as the clan literally received it's name from being risen from the dead. The first daimyo of the clan, Anbeddo Shizori, was the first to raise the dead, and is still the only one to ever do so. After losing his son, Anbeddo Rignore, Shizori withdrew himself from outside contact. Shizori devoted all hours of every day to find a way to bring his son back to life, and he finally found a way. Two years before the fall of the shogunate, Shizori prayed for his son's return, and was approached by the devil himself. The deal was made. Shizori's son shall be brought back to life, along with Shizori's brother and sister. Shizori's deal however, corrupted him and within a year, he withdrew himself from his family's life and with the fall of the shogunate, he hopes to rise.

Members of the Anbeddo:
Anbeddo Cesari (Collaboration) Male
Anbeddo Rignore (Collaboration) Male
Anbeddo Senesta (Collaboration) Female

Characteristics
Anbeddo Cesari
Cesari is dressed in rusted royal guard armor, his eyes are white inside pure darkness, his inner light struggling to keep control.
Anbeddo Rignore
Rignore is dressed in a paladin's suit, holy and divine it has yet to be scratched or decay, his head exposed free of the armor, his eyes peer out with yellow pupils inside jet black.
Anbeddo Senesta
Senesta is outfitted in a medic's garb, showing the corruption of the devil it is shaded of grey and blood-stained sleeves, her eyes blue inside darkness.

Skills:
Anbeddo Cesari - Specialization : Collaboration - Health : 90
Unholy Stance
Cost - 1 Strength
Class - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 5 turns
Effect - Cesari enters the unholy fighting stance. Cesari's Unholy Cleave is altered and his allies gain 10 damage reduction to melee and ranged skills, this skill lasts 4 turns.

Unholy Cleave
Cost - 1 strength
Class - Melee, Instant
Cooldown - 0 turns
Effect - Cesari swings his axe with unholy strength, dealing 20 damage to one enemy. If Unholy Stance is active, Cesari deals 20 damage to all enemies, and the skill has a cooldown of 1.

Death Pact
Cost - 1 wisdom, 1 random
Class - Tactic, Aura
Cooldown - Infinite
Effect - Death Pact ignores invulnerability. Cesari and one target enemy takes 10 unavoidable affliction damage per turn until either Cesari or the target dies. If the target is killed before Cesari, Cesari is healed to 75 health.

Protection of the Damned
Cost - 1 random
Class - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 4 turns
Effect - Cesari becomes invulnerable for one turn.

Anbeddo Rignore - Specialization : Collaboration - Health : 100
God's Presence
Cost - 1 random
Class - Tactic, Aura
Cooldown - 2 turns
Effect - Melee, Mental and Ranged damage dealt to Rignore and his allies is decreased by 10 while this skill is active. This skill share's cooldown with Devil's Presence and removes Devil's Presence when used.

Devil's Presence
Cost - 1 random
Class - Tactic, Aura
Cooldown - 2 turns
Effect - Melee, Mental and Ranged damage dealt to all enemies is increased by 5 and all enemies receive 5 affliction damage every turn while this skill is active and this skill ignores invulnerability. This skill share's cooldown with God's Presence and removes God's Presence when used.

Divine Intervention
Cost - 1 strength, 1 Wisdom
Class - Mental, Instant
Cooldown - 1 turns
Effect - Requires one presence to be active. When God's Presence is active; Divine Intervention heals all allies for 20 health and deals 20 damage to all enemies. When Devil's Presence is active; Divine Intervention deals 20 damage to all enemies, and 10 affliction damage the following turn.

Divine Armor
Cost - 1 random
Class - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 4 turns
Effect - Rignore becomes invulnerable for 1 turn.

Anbeddo Senesta - Specialization : Disruption - Health: 80
Curse: Mind Decay
Cost - 1 intelligence
Class - Mental, Instant
Cooldown - 1 turn
Effect - Senesta stuns one enemy for one turn and deals 15 affliction damage to that enemy.

Blessing: Prosperation
Cost - 1 wisdom, 1 random
Class - Tactic, instant
Cooldown - 2 turns
Effect - Senesta heals one ally for half of their current health.

Blessing and Curse: Body and Soul
Cost - 1 intelligence, 1 wisdom
Class - Mental, aura
Cooldown - 4 turns
Effect - Senesta heals all allies for 10 health each turn for two turns, all enemies receive 10 affliction damage for two turns, all targets are stunned during this time.

Blessing: Protection
Cost - 1 random
Class - Tactic, instant
Cooldown - 4 turns
Effect - Senesta makes herself invulnerable for one turn.

Clan Item:
Anbeddo Unholy Contract
Cost - 1 intelligence, 1 wisdom
Class - Tactic, instant
Cooldown - 6 turns
Effect - The caster and all his/her allies call upon the devil's assistance, and each receive a protector of 20 health.
  Posted on February 2, 2011 4:59 AM
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DeadSight, The Raging Saint

Contribution: 839 (696 + 143)
Joined: January 11, 2011
POST FOUR - Fourth Clan
Kami Clan
Kami translates as "Divine"

History:
The Kami clan has been a clan of fiery spirit and undoubted devotion over years and years. The clan doesn't quite see eye to eye with the Chi-no clan, as they find their methods inhumane. The Kami both respect and despise the limited members of the Anbeddo, most because those brought to life by the Devil's magic are corrupt, but they have yet to see the purity in some of those who have risen...

Members of the Kami Clan:
Kami Rygo (Disruption) - Male
Kami Victice (Disruption) - Female
Kami Rinelde (Assassination) - Male


Characteristics:
Kami Rygo
Kami Rygo is dressed in a white robe, trimmed in gold. His eyes are blind, but he sees the same as everyone else.

Kami Victice
Victice is dressed in the paladin's attire. Pure white gold crafted and trimmed with black onyx. Her head is exposed and her eyes are blue while her long white hair (despite her young age) drapes down).

Kami Rinelde - Specialization : Disruption - Health : 80
Rinelde is dressed in the monk assassin's garb. His chest is exposed, as any more material would just weigh him down. His eyes are pure white, blind, but his blade strikes all the more deadly.

Skills:
Kami Rygo - Specialization : Collaboration - Health : 90
Prayer: Blinding Light
Cost - 1 wisdom, 1 random
Classes - Mental, Instant
Cooldown - 1 turn
Effect - Rygo deals 15 burning affliction to all enemies, and stuns one random enemy.

Prayer: Courage
Cost - 1 wisdom, 1 intelligence
Classes - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 3 turns
Effect - For two turns, any attacking teammate will gain 10 damage reduction and an additional 10 damage to melee damage the following turns.

Prayer: Fortitude
Cost - 1 intelligence
Classes - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 2 turns
Effect - Rygo heals one ally for 10 health every turn for three turns, that ally is immune to stuns during this time. This skill cannot be used on an ally already affected.

Prayer: Salvation
Cost - 1 random
Classes - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 4 turns
Effect - Rygo becomes invulnerable for one turn.

Kami Victice - Specialization : Disruption - Health : 80
Divine Judgement
Cost - 1 Strength, 1 Intelligence
Classes - Ranged, Instant
Cooldown - 2 turns
Effect - Victice deals 35 piercing ranged damage to one enemy, that enemy is stunned for one turn.

Faith
Cost - 1 Intelligence, 1 random
Classes - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 3 turns
Effect - All new skills targeting target ally are countered for two turns. This skill ends when two skills are countered.

Divine Appointment
Cost - 1 Wisdom
Classes - Tactic, Aura
Cooldown - Infinite
Effect - Victice is healed for 5 health every turn permanently. Divine Judgment deals an additional 5 damage. Melee and Ranged damage dealt to Victice is decreased by 5.

Divine Protection
Cost - 1 random
Classes - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 4 Turns
Effect - Victice is invulnerable for one turn.

Kami Rinelde - Specialization : Assassination - Health : 70
Holy Dagger
Cost - none
Classes - Mental, Instant
Cooldown - 5 turns
Effect - For four turns, Rinelde is healed by 5 health each turn, and melee damage dealt by Rinelde is dealt in the form of affliction damage.

Divine Shot
Cost - 1 agility, 1 random
Classes - Ranged, Instant
Cooldown - 2 turns
Effect - Rinelde deals 20 ranged damage to one enemy, that enemy is affected by a burning affliction dealing 5 damage every turn permanently (this affliction stacks), and takes 5 less damage from Divine Shot (This effect does not stack).

Holy Precision
Cost - 1 agility, 1 random
Classes - Melee, Instant
Cooldown - 2 turns.
Effect - Rinelde deals 20 melee damage to one enemy, that enemy is affected by a burning affliction dealing 5 damage every turn permanently (this affliction stacks), and takes 5 less damage from Holy Precision (this affect does not stack).

Divine Shrouding
Cost - 1 Random
Classes - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 4 turns.
Effect - Rinelde is invulnerable for 1 turn.

Clan Item:
Prayer book of the Kami
Cost - None
Classes - Passive, Aura.
Cooldown - None
Effect - Healing done to team members is increased by 5 permanently.
  Posted on February 2, 2011 4:59 AM
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DeadSight, The Raging Saint

Contribution: 839 (696 + 143)
Joined: January 11, 2011
POST FIVE - Demon Lord, White Guardian, and Shop
Demon Lord: Anbeddo Shizori
Shizori is garbed in a full suit of armor, made of a black metal trimmed with crimson.
Mission: Free the Soul
Objective - Kill Shizori and release him from his contract with the devil.
Skills:
Anbeddo Shizori - Health : 450
Sleight of Tongue
Cost - None (Boss)
Class - Mental, Instant
Cooldown - 1 turn
Effect - Shizori redirects the highest damage attack from an enemy this turn to the enemy with the lowest health.

Devil's Intent
Cost - None (Boss)
Class - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - Infinite
Effect - Shizori deals 10 affliction damage to all enemies every turn until he his killed.

Anguish
Cost - None (Boss)
Class - Mental, Instant
Cooldown - 1 turn
Effect - Shizori deals 30 melee damage to all enemies, ignoring invulnerability. (This skill is on cooldown until Shizori is under 300 health)

Devil's Tome
Cost - None (Boss)
Class - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - Infinite
Effect - Grants Shizori a protector of 100 health, Shizori is healed for 20 health every turn until the protector is destroyed (This skill is on cooldown until Shizori is under 200 health)

Mission Reward:
Geto Unlocked
Devil's Tome
Cost - None
Class - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - Infinite
Effect - All Team members are granted one random energy.

White Guardian: Geto - Specialization : Disruption - Health : 100
History: Geto was appointed the powers of the Mizu and Chi-no clans for his devotion to the shogunate during the first stabilization of the region. Even though Geto has been trusted with the region's well being, he has not been able to control the powers at work, those of dark and light.
Appearance: Geto wears a long robe composed of black and white, symbolizing the balance he keeps between spirits.
Skills:
Coagulation:
Cost - 1 Wisdom
Classes - Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 3 turns
Effect - Geto rapidly condenses his blood to heal his wounds. Geto is healed for 30 health.

Blood Mist:
Cost - 1 Wisdom, 1 Intelligence
Classes - Tactic, Aura
Cooldown - 4 turns
Effect - Geto deals 15 affliction damage to all enemies and reduces ranged damage dealt by all enemies by 5 for three turns.

Blood Dragon:
Cost - 2 Wisdom
Classes - Mental, Aura
Cooldown - 5 turns
Effect - Geto summons a dragon of his own blood. Geto takes 15 affliction damage and gains a protector of 60 health. Geto deals 10 affliction damage to all enemies until the protector is destroyed.

Blood Rain:
Cost - 1 intelligence, 2 random
Classes - Tactic, instant
Cooldown - 3 turns
Effect - Requires Blood Dragon. Geto deals damage to all enemies equal to the health of his protector. Geto's protector is destroyed.

Shop: Shinsei Shoppu
Items:Cost
Warbanner of Leeching: cost - 200 gold
Cost : None (Passive)
Classes : Passive, Aura
Cooldown - None
Effect - Whenever an ally takes damage, they receive health leech of up to 10 damage next turn.

Warbanner of Revenge: cost - 200 gold
Cost : None (Passive)
Classes : Passive, Aura
Cooldown - None
Effect - Whenever an ally is killed, remaining team members' melee damage and ranged damage is increased by 10 permanently. Maximum of 15 bonus damage from this item.

Poison Arrows: cost - 150 gold
Cost : None (Passive)
Classes : Passive, Aura
Cooldown - None
Effect - Multi Shot, Precision Shot, Crossbow Shot and True Shot affect the target with a poison affliction dealing 5 affliction damage permanently each turn.

Ice Arrows: cost - 150 gold
Cost : 1 Agility, 1 intelligence
Classes : Passive
Cooldown - 6 turns
Effect - Stun target opponent for two turns.

Tome of the Dead cost - 100 gold
Cost : 1 random
Classes : Mental, instant
Cooldown - 4 turns
Effect - Grants the user a protector of 20 health

Net cost - 100 gold
Cost : None
Classes : Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 3 turns
Effect - Stuns target enemy's melee skills for two turns.

Cursed Armor cost - 180 gold
Cost : None
Classes : Passive, Aura
Cooldown - None
Effect - Grants the wearer a protector of 50 health, but deals 5 affliction damage every turn to the wearer.

Leeches cost - 90 gold
Cost : None
Classes : Tactic, Instant
Cooldown - 4 turns
Effect - Places a drug affliction on target enemy, removing all poison afflictions from them, dealing 10 affliction damage to them, and healing the user by 10 health.

Total Shop Cost: 1170 gold
  Posted on February 2, 2011 5:00 AM
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DeadSight, The Raging Saint

Contribution: 839 (696 + 143)
Joined: January 11, 2011
POST SIX - Mission/Story Outline. Updates/Reworks.
Missions and Story Progression
KEY =
UNDERLINE : EPISODE/MISSION TITLE (objectives/rewards underneath)
MISSION/STORY DIALOGUE

The Hollow Lands, a Forsaken Region
Jinsei - So why are we headed here again?
Yuukigaaru - These lands hold many secrets, many legends, and many powerful allies.
Jinsei - But this is the FORSAKEN region, so you know, shouldn't we... not be here?
(A shadow rustles leaves)
Jyouzo - On your toes.
Yuukigaaru - Present yourself now, or be considered an enemy.
(Mizu Misuto emerges from the brush)
Misuto - I am Mizu Misuto, assassin of the Mizu clan. What business do you have entering this region, you are of no clan that settles here.
Yuukigaaru - We have business with the clans who settle here.
Misuto - Oh, and which clan may that be?
Yuukigaaru - All of them.
Misuto - Even the brutish Chi-no?
Yuukigaaru - Yes. All of the sort.
Misuto - Well then, how am i to expect you not to be an enemy of the Mizu if you seek the Chi-no?

Proving Peace
Mizu Misuto has tracked you in the woods of the Nakazora Valley near his clan's village. He wishes only one thing, trust, but you must prove it to him.
Collaboration : 12 (-2)
Disruption : 6 (-2)
Rewards - Access to Mizu Village. 35 gold.

Misuto - Well, it seems you may not be an enemy of mine after all, follow me, i shall take you to my clan's village.
Mizu Kori - Misuto! Why did you bring such outsiders to the village?
Yuukigaaru - We represent nothing but a treaty for those still loyal to the Shogunate.
Kori - Shogunate? You think the fallen shogun can help us now? What we need is peace within our region before we seek it outside of its borders.
Yuukigaaru - Then let us help you with that peace.

Recon on the Chi-No
Disruption : 12 (-2)
Assassination : 5 (-2)
Collaboration : 3 (-0)
Rewards - Access to Chi-no village. 35 gold.

Chi-no Teishi - Why are you here, and more importantly, why shouldn't i kill you where you stand?
Jyouzo - We are here seeking peace, we are of the fallen shogunate and want to rebirth the order that was lost and restore all clans to their rightful equal powers.
Teishi - Under who's name are you brought here?
Jinsei - We are here by word of the Mizu clan, they seek peace within the region, and we need your help to attain it.
Teishi - My help? Why would the Mizu want my help?

Binding Lost Blood
Collaboration : 13 (-2)
Assassination : 3 (-0)
Disruption : 3 (-0)
Rewards : Mizu Misuto unlocked. 50 gold.

Misuto - Teishi. I never thought our clans would meet out of battle.
Teishi - Yes, well, neither had I.
Misuto - We need to speak with Sakenomi about dealing with such a peace offering.
Teishi - Sakenomi is busy with work beyond that of your silly peace offering. We are still threatened by the Kami, had you forgotten?
Misuto - Ofcourse, but with the Mizu by your side, we may speak to the Kami on peaceful terms.

Approaching The Kami
Collaboration : 17 (-4)
Rewards : Access to Kami Village. 50 gold.

Kami Rinelde - You expect the Kami to trust one from the Chi-no? Our order is sacred, and never shall one from such a corrupt clan step foot in it.
Yuukigaaru - Well then let us be the middle man.
Rinelde - But what do you know of our relations to the Chi-no, they are brutish and inhumane, you hold no right to speak on their behalf, for you are a man of the honest sword, though not holy, it is honest.
Yuukigaaru - Then trust my honesty.

The Order of the Kami
Collaboration : 12 (-2)
Disruption : 8 (-2)
Assassination : 3 (-0)
Rewards : Chi-no Teishi unlocked. 40 gold.

Rinelde - Let me speak to my sire, madam Victice, on grounds of letting one of the chi-no here, she always had understood the meaning of peace, and perhaps she could make a decision for such an offering from such a terror.
Yuukigaaru - We thank you Rinelde. We shall part from your village at once, and return after speaking to the Mizu on your behalf, what shall we tell them?
Rinelde - The Mizu have the trust of the Kami.

Returning to the Mizu
Collaboration : 14 (-2)
Disruption : 8 (-2)
Rewards : Mizu Kawa. 60 gold.

Mizu Kori - The Kami have our trust as well, and they know that. But the chi-no still must prove themselves. We cannot trust them entirely until the fel one of the forsaken Anbeddo.
Hanta - You wish us to lay siege on the Anbeddo? We both know that they hold the ally of the Demon Lord.
Kori - He won't pose a threat, he had abandoned the Anbeddo to their own curse. He has been driven insane from the Devil's whisper.
Hanta - So you expect us to wage war on the forsaken?
Kori - Precisely.

Returning the Damned
Collaboration : 3 (-0)
Disruption : 8 (-2)
Assassination : 14 (-4)
Rewards - Shinsei Shoppu unlocked.

Kori - It is time to send word to the Kami that we will join them in battle. Even with the Chi-no by our side. Let Kawa set off with you, she has strong ties to the Kami.
Mizu Kawa - Let us go then commander.
Kami Victice - The Chi-no and Mizu stand by our side? This is a strong alliance indeed... let us begin our assault on the Anbeddo, force them back and kill those corrupted by the Devil's intent.
Chi-no Teishi - Well then, let us begin.

Blood stained graves
Assassination : 20 (-4)
Collaboration : 21 (-3)
Disruption : 12 (-1)
Rewards : Chi-no Hanta unlocked. Mizu Kawa unlocked. Kami Rinelde unlocked. 150 gold.

Chi-no Sakenomi - The Mizu and Kami have been foolish to neglect the power of the chi-no for such a time, why had you not looked for our aide sooner in destroying such a forsaken foe?
Kami Victice - Let us not forget Sakenomi, that your powers are from a terrible source.
Sakenomi - Is blood so terrible that it give you life?
Mizu Kori - I suggest you both end the bickering, we are in a war now. It is time to infiltrate and destroy the Anbeddo from the inside out.

The Dead Decay Slowly
Collaboration : 15 (-2)
Disruption : 18 (-3)
Assassination : 6 (-2)
Rewards : Mizu Kori unlocked. 70 gold.

Kami Victice - I have sent word for our patron's aide.
Sakenomi - You truly believe Rygo can better our position?
Victice - Rygo holds close relations to our Lord. It is not Rygo i expect to bring us aide, but our Lord instead.
Sakenomi - Your beliefs almost insult mine.
Victice - The same can be in return Sakenomi.
Kori - Well i believe it's time we wait out for your Rygo then, hold these cursed men back as long as we can!

A Saint's Arrival
Disruption : 18 (-2)
Assassination : 8 (-1)
Collaboration : 9 (-5)
Rewards : Kami Victice unlocked. 60 gold. Access to Anbeddo village.

Kami Rygo - I apologize for the delay.
Sakenomi - That doesn't change that you're late.
Rygo - You're welcome that i'm here Sakenomi, and the Lord as well.
Anbeddo Senesta - Well, we have not seen outsiders in a long time.
Rygo - You will not see much more after this point on Anbeddo. Your clan must prepare to meet their judgement.
Senesta - You know better than everyone else that we have already been judged Rygo, we are simply released early.
Rygo - Then instead parish entirely.
Senesta - For what? My family holds itself loyal to the land, perhaps not my brother, but my brother and nephew are loyal to the pledges they made in their lives before.
Rygo - Rignore had fallen from our God in his rising from the Devil, you dare tell me he is still loyal to our order?
Senesta - More than you Rygo, he has been to hell and back, and still holds the scars your Lord gave him.

Reconciliation
Collaboration : 15 (-2)
Disruption : 12 (-3)
Rewards : Anbeddo Senesta unlocked. 40 gold.

Anbeddo Rignore - The Kami dare steps foot in this village?
Rygo - Rignore, it seems you have lost the faith.
Rignore - I lost your faith Rygo, i have been resurrected but my words still fell deaf on your ears.
Rygo - That is because the devil's magic is what brings you back!
Rignore - My father's sacrifice brought me back! And the lord's trade to the Devil, yet that will no sway your standing.
Sakenomi - Rygo, i know the Devil, and i'll tell you, he does not rest in this boy.
Rignore - Sakenomi, you dare not have a word in this village. You are the one who took my uncle's life.
Sakenomi - I didn't take, simply gave it to someone else, and it looks like that someone gave it back to him.
Rignore - I will teach you that a life is something not to be taken!

Vengeance In Blood
Assassination : 22 (-4)
Collaboration : 12 (-3)
Rewards : Chi-no Sakenomi unlocked. 160 gold.

Anbeddo Senesta - Sakenomi! That is enough. You know Cesare will kill you this time if you were to harm his nephew.
Sakenomi - That didn't stop him from keeping the boy on a loose leash Senesta.
Senesta - Sakenomi, what is it that brings you here to our village?
Yuukigaaru - We seek peace in the region, and order back to the shogun. We need allies. This region, the Hollow Lands, is one holding many that would be useful.
Senesta - I see, but Shizori has fallen... ill...
Sakenomi - Shizori will be taken care of.
Senesta - I see... please, release my brother of his torment.
Rygo - We will need the aid of your clan then.
Rignore - Then prove to me Rygo, why we should not abandon you like you did me.

Redemption of Faith
Collaboration : 17 (-2)
Disruption : 4 (-2)
Assassination : 8 (-2)
Rewards : Kami Rygo unlocked. 140 gold.

Rygo - I apologize Rignore, you have my faith.
Rignore - and you have some of mine Rygo.
Rygo - You were always a splendid Paladin of our Order.
Rignore - But no longer, i am now loyal to only the Lord. Not such an order made of blind folk who lead their followers blind too.
Rygo - The decision is your own.
Sakenomi - and a splendid one.
Rignore - You i do not want to hear from.
Sakenomi - Well then perhaps Cesari will.

Revelations of Rivals
Collaboration : 20 (-4)
Disruption : 3 (-0)
Rewards : Anbeddo Rignore unlocked. 70 gold.

Anbeddo Cesari - Sakenomi.
Sakenomi - Never thought i'd see you again.
Cesari - I wonder why.
Sakenomi - Perhaps it is because you invaded the Chi-no and died taking what is ours.
Cesari - You want your Dagger then?
Sakenomi - Yes. You know the power of that heirloom belongs only to the Chi-no.
Rygo - Cesari, your nephew took something of ours to the grave as well.
Cesari - Rygo. That Prayer book served my nephew no good in his first life, why should it serve you differently?
Rygo - Because it was meant for the Kami, not him.
Cesari - Then come you two, and take back your families' gifts, but convince me that i shall return them.
Stealing the Stolen
Disruption : 14 (-2)
Collaboration : 12 (-1)
Assassination : 3 (-0)
Rewards : Chi-no Dagger of Woe. Prayer Book of the Kami. 140 gold.

Cesari - There, take back your useless papers and iron. The Anbeddo have lost much more than both of you.
Rygo - And what may that be Cesari?
Cesari - We lost our lives, our souls. We are hollow. We are damned.
Rygo - But you can still be saved.
Cesari - Only at the death of my brother.
Mizu Kori - Then let us begin our preperations.

Preperation of War
Collaboration : 21 (-3)
Disruption : 6 (-0)
Rewards : Anbeddo Cesari unlocked. Holy Mizu Spring Water. 70 gold.

Cesari - Let us begin the our motion to my brother.
Sakenomi - You may not want the boy to come Cesari.
Rinelde - I know of my father's position, and his intent. If he wishes to be freed, it will be by my hand.
Rygo - Well then Rinelde, we follow you.
Kori - Rygo, i do not think that is wise, he is still a boy.
Rygo - He has been through more than us all Kori.
Kori - Yes, but that doesn't mean he is prepared.
Sakenomi - Let us move together, no leader. Anarchy. The state of nature. Only blood in bodies, motion, and death. The way the world began.
Rygo - Your history is lacking Sakenomi, i agree with Kori, we need someone strong to lead.
(Geto is waiting beyond the shadows)
Geto - Your party is strong. But Shizori is beyond human now.
Sakenomi - Everybody here is.
Geto - Inhumane does not mean you are not human Sakenomi.
Sakenomi - No, but the power wield is what makes me beyond human.
Geto - I cannot let you pass to your death so willingly.
Sakenomi - I will not be so willing if it were to come Geto.
Geto - You cannot survive long against Shizori.
Sakenomi - Well then let us prove to you...
Gatekeeper's Aid
Collaboration : 15 (-2)
Assassination : 21 (-2)
Disruption : 19 (-4)
Rewards : 140 Gold.

Geto - Your party is week. Or atleast you are Sakenomi.
Sakenomi - Weakness is giving in Geto, which you have long ago letting this man become who he is.
Geto - Perhaps you are right. Maybe it is time i safeguarded the land again.
Rygo - Then begin doing so, fight with us Geto.
Geto - Very well, let us move on.
Shizori - You just stepped into hell.
Rinelde - Father, we you know nothing of the torments that await there.
Shizori - Hell is the burning in my veins Rinelde, Hell is the melting of my faith, the taking of my son.
Rinelde - But i am here now.
Shizori - Standing against me.
Rinelde - You know you have sinned.
Shizori - All for your sake.
Rinelde - Perhaps you are right father, but your soul is damned now, and it is time for your judgment. I pray for you.
Shizori - and I damn you.

Praying for the Damned
Defeat Anbeddo Shizori
Rewards : Anbeddo Unholy Contract. Geto unlocked.

Epilogue : Nakazora Ranzu Region
Shizori - Rinelde, you... you all... thank you.
Rinelde - May mercy be bestowed upon you.
Shizori - and upon you... thank you... for releasing me.
Geto - You are no longer bound by the Devil's will Shizori, make your journey now before he takes you in his grasp.
Shizori - I believe... that to be. inevitable Geto. The contract has damned me and my soul. Blessings to you all.


Updates
Newest to Oldest
2/3/11:
Missions and Story completed.
Missions and Story of the Region added.
2/2/11:
Kami Clan added.
Shop added.
White Guardian added.
Demon Lord added.
Anbeddo Clan added.
Mizu Clan added.
Chi-no Clan added to begin thread.

Nerfs/Buffs/Reworks
Newest to Oldest
2/3/11:
Overall Reworks
2/2/11:
Reworked Chi-no Invulnerability skills.
Reworked Blood Feast.
Reworked Self Penance.
Reworked Mark of blood.
Dagger of Woe Renamed.
Sakenomi Nerfed.
Teishi "Regression" reworked.

  Posted on February 2, 2011 5:00 AM
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GUILTSS, The Uncontrollable Major of Hanto

Contribution: 323 (295 + 28)
Joined: October 8, 2010
First! Go go DS! xD
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  Posted on February 2, 2011 5:06 AM
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DeadSight, The Raging Saint

Contribution: 839 (696 + 143)
Joined: January 11, 2011
GUILTSS wrote:

First! Go go DS! xD

Chyeah :cool haha.
  Posted on February 2, 2011 5:10 AM
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GUILTSS, The Uncontrollable Major of Hanto

Contribution: 323 (295 + 28)
Joined: October 8, 2010
Isnt Sakenomi abit op for me?
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  Posted on February 2, 2011 5:12 AM
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DeadSight, The Raging Saint

Contribution: 839 (696 + 143)
Joined: January 11, 2011
GUILTSS wrote:

Isnt Sakenomi abit op for me?

Probably, haha. I pretty much made him to deal alot of damage while taking alot, remember that heart expulsion's affliction stacks on top of his prep.
  Posted on February 2, 2011 5:14 AM
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Lordpda, The ambitious Dreamer

Contribution: 33 (30 + 3)
Joined: July 27, 2010
Umm, no invulnerabilty skill?
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  Posted on February 2, 2011 5:14 AM
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DeadSight, The Raging Saint

Contribution: 839 (696 + 143)
Joined: January 11, 2011
Lordpda wrote:

Umm, no invulnerabilty skill?

Nope :amused just lots of damage, and a heal.
  Posted on February 2, 2011 5:16 AM
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DeadSight, The Raging Saint

Contribution: 839 (696 + 143)
Joined: January 11, 2011
I've gotta go, i'll check the thread when i log on tomorrow, please leave comments on what i can change.
I don't expect these characters to be well balanced at this time, i need your help to do that!
  Posted on February 2, 2011 5:55 AM
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louisng114, The Ambitious Collector of the BETA

Contribution: 91 (76 + 15)
Joined: February 19, 2010
interesting concept

Chi-no Sakenomi
Blood Lust is too good. Adding two random or one specific to the cost would be just right.
Heart Expulsion is channeling, but it stuns Sakenomi?

Chi-no Hanta
Non-White Guardian characters should have an invul move.

Chi-no Teishi
Regression needs reworking; it is broken.

Dagger of Woe
Clan items need the clan name in the item name, so Dagger of Chi-no is more appropriate as a clan item's name.
  Posted on February 2, 2011 6:40 AM
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Xelian, The Dark Demon of the Ancients

Contribution: 623 (564 + 59)
Joined: February 17, 2010
You characters seems a bit overpowered to me. Too many free skills granting random energies. Stuns. The ability to completely nulify someones damage for two turns. (if you haven't noticed or damage reducing skills ends when the enemy perform a skill)