My ideas for Fuko region

my custom regions:
Fuko Region
Yoso Region

Kokoro Village
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A village who's inhabitants have vast ammounts of knowledge, they are a calm and peaceful village, though, despite this, they can be fearsome enemies in a battle, due to their serenity and ability to assess situations with utmost ease. All inhabitants of the village have bright green eyes.
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Village item: Field Map
effect: Reduces cooldowns of all of the holder's skills by 1 for 4 turns. This item can only be equipped by the Kokoro clan.
cost: none
cooldown: infinite
classlist: tactic + instant

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Kokoro Busshitsu
HP: 120
Specialty: Disruption
achievement titles:
@50
...Rider...
@75
...Of Lightning
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Busshitsu is the most physically powerful of the Kokoro clan. His strength and speed make him stand out from the rest of the clan, but he still keeps a cool head..
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Busshitsu is an abnormally large man, huge eyebrows, shaggy brown hair that partly covers up his eyes. His outfit is not very intricate, and is made up of dark purple pants, and a lighter purple tunic.
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skill#1: Strike Like Lightning
Busshitsu deals 40 melee damage to an enemy and stuns them for 1 turn.
cost: 1 agility + 1 strength
cooldown: 2
classlist: Melee + instant

skill#2: Eyes of the Tempest
Busshitsu counters the first melee skill used by a single enemy for 1 turn. If that enemy is countered, they will take 15 melee damage. This skill is invisible to the enemy.
cost: 1 agility
cooldown: 1
classlist: Tactic + Channeling

skill#3: Roar Like Thunder
Busshitsu and his allies gain a protector of 35 hitpoints, and the enemy team will deal 10 less melee and ranged damage for 3 turns. This skill will end when all protectors are destroyed.
cost: 2 intelligence
cooldown: 5
classlist: tactic + channeling

Skill#4: Great Protector
One ally target is made invulnerable and melee and ranged damage will be reduced by 20 on Busshitsu for 1 turn.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 5
classlist: tactic + instant


Kokoro Rikigaku
HP: 90
Specialty: Assasination
achievement titles:
@40
The Inventive...
@80
...Genius...
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A child prodigy, Rikigaku is the smartest person in the village. Her cleverness in setting up traps in unmatched, and she can use her innocent appeal to avoid enemies and strike them in the back.
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Burned her left arm, leaving a scar with a pattern resembling vines. Has pale skin, and wears a large box-like hat. Her outfit is a large dark purple shirt and midnight blue shorts.
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Skill#1: Ambush
Rikigaku deals 25 piercing ranged damage to an enemy.
cost: 1 intelligence + 1 random
cooldown: none
classlist: ranged + instant

Skill#2: Innocent girl
Rikigaku reduces melee damage dealt to her by 25 for 2 turns, and Ambush will deal double damage to a selected enemy next turn.
cost: 1 intelligence
cooldown: 3
classlist: tactic + instant

skill#3: Hidden Trap
Rikigaku deals 15 damage to an enemy. If affected enemy uses a skill next round, they will take 15 additional damage.
cost: 1 intelligence
cooldown: none
classlist: ranged + instant

skill#4: Tactical Evasion
Makes Rikigaku invulnerable for 1 turn.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant


Kokoro Botai
HP: 80
specialty: collaboration
achievement titles:
@65
...Master...
@100
... Of Puppets
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Daimyo of Kokoro Village, Botai has succesfully managed to defeat hundreds of enemies in his lifetime. His influence is so strong, he has a multitude of loyal warriors at his disposal.
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Middle-aged, his outfit is a white robe decorated with a vine pattern consisting of multiple vines colored light pink, purple, blue, black, and dark green. is not very tall, though.
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Skill#1: Archer Volley.
Botai deals 10 ranged damage to an enemy and 5 ranged damage to a random enemy each turn for 2 turns.
cost: 1 wisdom
cooldown: 1
classlist: ranged + instant

skill#2: Reinforcements
Botai gains a protector of 25 hitpoints and increases ranged damage dealt by Archer Volley by 5 and melee and ranged damage reduced by Personal Army by 5 permanently. This effect stacks, and ends when all protectors are destroyed.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 2
classlist: tactic + instant

Skill#3: Personal Army
All teammates take 10 less Melee and ranged damage for 3 turns.
cost: 1 wisdom + 1 random
cooldown: 3
classlist: tactic + instant

Skill#4: Decoy
Makes Botai invulnerable for 1 turn
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant

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Village Achievements
titles:
@ 100
...of the Kokoro

@ 200
The Intelligent...

@300
...Strategist...

@450
...Of the Clear Mind

Village 2
Arashi
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A village where it is always raining, the people who dwell here have the power to control wind and/or lightning to some degree. The village was, at one time, divided into two factions, the ones who were born with the power to control wind, and the one with the power to control lightning. After years of fighting, the feud ended with a marriage of two people from both sides. Their son was the first in the village to have both powers at once, and was also intelligent and wise, despite his young age. Due to his maturity, among other skills, he was made Daimyo at a very young age. The inhabitants all have purple eyes, and wear a wardrobe of mostly electric blue, even the people who use wind, not lightning, ironic as it is.
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Village item: Lightning rod
effect: Targets an enemy permanently. Whenever Winds of Fortune, Hurricane Wall, Raging Tornado, Black Lightning, Shockwave, Vengeful Tempest, Menacing Temperament, or Coming of Ragnarok is used, affected enemies will take 5 affliction damage. This item can only be equipped by the Arashi clan.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 2
classtype: tactic + instant

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Arashi Tate
HP: 90
Specialty: Collaboration
achievement titles:
@45
The Defensive...
@60
... Of Twisters
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Tate is a timid boy from the Wind branch of the village. As such, he has the power to manipulate wind to aid his allies. Despite his young age, Tate has managed to figure out how to effectively use his powers to protect his friends. Is one of the peacekeepers in the village, also, and was selected by the daimyo himself.
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Tate is very young, very short, but with long white hair that reaches down to his shoulders and covers most of his face. He generally wears clothing that is much too large for him.
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skill#1: Winds of Fortune
Targets 1 teammate, who deals 10 more ranged damage and takes 10 less ranged damage, and gains 1 random chakra each turn for 2 turns.
cost: 1 wisdom + 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant

skill#2: Hurricane Wall
Makes all team members invulnerable for 1 turn.
cost: 2 wisom
cooldown: 3
classlist: tactic + instant

skill#3: Raging Twister
Deals 10 piercing ranged damage to all enemies for 2 turns. During this time, invulnerability is disabled on affected enemies.
cost: 1 wisdom
cooldown: 2
classlist: ranged + channeling

Skill#4: Gone With the Wind
Tate is invulnerable for 1 turn.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant


Arashi Isshun
HP: 100
Specialty: Disruption
achievement titles:
@45
The Blinding...
@80
...Flash...
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One of the military leaders from the Lightning branch of the village, Isshun can use his signature move, developed after years of practicing with his powers of lightning manipulation, to create openings in his enemies' formations and strike them when they're vulnerable. Really, a nice guy outside of battle, though.
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Tall and lanky, middle-aged, very dark red hair, though it is short.
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Skill#1: Black Lightning
Isshun deals 10 piercing ranged damage each turn to all enemies who have their mental and tactic skills stunned for 2 turns.
cost: 1 intelligence + 1 random
cooldown: 3
classlist: ranged + instant

Skill#2: Shockwave
Reduces all enemies' ranged and melee damage by 15 for 1 turn
cost: 1 intelligence
cooldown: 3
classlist: tactic + instant

skill#3: Roar of the Thunder Gods
Isshin deals 20 affliction damage to an enemy and stuns them for 1 turn. After used, this skill is altered, and affects all enemies for the cost of 2 intelligence, returning to it's original effect after use.
cost: 1 intelligence
cooldown: 2
classlist: tactic + instant

skill#4: Tactical Retreat
Makes Isshin invulnerable for 1 turn.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant


Arashi Shibaru
HP: 110
specialty: Assasination
achievement titles:
@65
...Stormbringer...
@100
... Of Black Rain
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Daimyo of Arashi village, and youngest person to become daimyo in the region's history, Shibaru is a legend in Arashi village because of his ability to control both lightning and wind. Despite his young age, Shibaru is very mature.
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Young, late-teens, bright blue hair that goes all over the place, though his outfit is incredibly regal in appearance.
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Skill#1: Vengeful Tempest
Shibaru deals 35 piercing ranged damage to an enemy, bypassing counters.
cost: 1 strength + 1 random
cooldown: 1
classlist: ranged + instant

skill#2: Menacing Temperament
Affects the enemy team with a Ki Affliction, reducing their ranged damage by 5 for 4 turns, dealing 5 affliction damage to a random enemy each turn during this time.
cost: 1 Strength
cooldown: 2
classlist: ranged + instant

Skill#3: Coming of Ragnarok
Shibaru deals 10 piercing ranged damage to all enemies for 3 turns. If this skill is used again while active, Shibaru deals 15 piercing ranged damage to all enemies and cancels Coming of Ragnarok. If used the turn immediately after activating the first effect, deals 5 more piercing damage.
cost: 1 wisdom + 1 intelligence
cooldown: none
classlist: ranged + channeling

Skill#4: Valhalla's Knights
Makes Shibaru invulnerable for 1 turn
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant
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Village Achievements
titles:
@ 150
...of the Arashi

@ 275
The Relentless...

@325
The Weathered...

@450
...Of the Black Storm

Kogai Outpost
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A small outpost on the outskirts of the region, Kogai is often occupied by a large gathering of mercenary samurai. It is a wild and chaotic town with no leader to take the place of the recently deceased leader, Hitori Danzo.
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Village item: Legendary Danzo Katana
effect: Deals 15 piercing melee damage to an enemy, bypassing counters and invulnerability. Has a starting cooldown of 1. This item can only be equipped by Kogai Mercenaries.
cost: none
cooldown: 2
classlist: melee + instant

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Hiniku Iyasu
HP: 90
Specialty: Collaboration
achievement titles:
@50
The Backwards...
@75
...Of Recovery
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Iyasu is a samurai who prefers to work with a partner. His sword is dull, but infused with a strange aura that has to power to absorb and release another person's life energy.
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Iyasu is an average-hight male with long flowing grey hair and brown eyes. His outfit is a white robe with black flames on the sleves that fade to grey halfway up the arm. Has a single, massive scar on his forehead that reaches from the temple, across the eyebrow, to the ear.
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skill#1: Healing Blade
Heals a teammate for 20 health and adds one stacking charge on Aura Blast.
cost: 1 agility
cooldown: none
classlist: tactic + instant

skill#2: Draining Sword
Deals 15 affliction damage to an enemy and heals the ally team for 5 health.
cost: 1 agility
cooldown: none
classlist: Melee + Instant

skill#3: Aura Blast
Deals 10 ranged damage to all enemies. For each charge on this skill, it will deal 5 more damage. Removes all charges on this skill.
cost: 1 intelligence + 1 random
cooldown: none
classlist: ranged + instant

Skill#4: Dull Blade Parry
Iyasu is invulnerable for 1 round
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant


Mayonaka Akari
HP: 100
Specialty: Disruption
achievement titles:
@40
The Grim...
@80
...Of Elysia
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A samurai with a strange sword, Akari is not one to be trifled with. Using an ability from his ancestors, he can create light to obstruct his enemies and delay their tactics. Also has a very pessimistic view of the world.
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Akari is a very tall but thin man with pale skin and wears a large black hooded cloak. the hood is always up, covering up his yellow eyes, though they do gleam on occasion. His sword is normal, but bends at the tip to resemble a scythe.
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Skill#1: Shining Glimpse of Heaven
All enemies are stunned for 1 turn. Next turn, Elysian Judgment will deal 25 more damage to affected targets.
cost: 1 intelligence + 1 strength
cooldown: 4
classlist: mental + instant

Skill#2: Elysian Judgment
Deals 25 melee damage to an enemy
cost: 1 strength + 1 random
cooldown: none
classlist: melee + instant

skill#3: Colorful Distortion
Stuns an enemy for 1 turn and destroys 1 random energy. Next turn, Elysian Judgment will deal 15 more damage to affected target.
cost: 1 intelligence
cooldown: 3
classlist: mental + instant

skill#4: Illusion mannequin
Makes Akari invulnerable for 1 turn.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant


Damasu Namida
HP: 110
specialty: assassination
achievement titles:
@65
The Backstabing ...
@90
... Traitor ...
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A lone-wolf renegade who follows his own rules. The only two things he cares about are battle and money.
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Aged a little, but not much, with tan skin. Has a scar in the shape of a 7-point star on his left cheek, and his eyes are pitch black. his outfit consists of generic armor in various shades of grey.
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Skill#1: Swift Destruction
Deals 15 melee damage to an enemy and stuns them for 1 turn. next turn, this skill loses its stun effect and costs 1 agility, but deals 15 more damage and gains 1 cooldown.
cost: 1 strength
cooldown: 0
classlist: melee + instant

skill#2: Udercover Operations
Namida is invulnerable for 3 turns, and deals 10 melee damage to a different random enemy each turn, bypassing invulnerability and counters.
cost: 1 intelligence
cooldown: 5
classlist: melee + instant

Skill#3: Double Agent
Deals 10 affliction damage to a teammate and heals Namida for 30 health, removes enemy afflictions, and Namida will ignore stuns for 1 turn.
cost: 1 wisdom
cooldown: 1
classlist: tactic + instant

Skill#4: Experienced Block
Makes Namida invulnerable for 1 turn
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant

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Village Achievements
titles:
@ 100
...of the Kogai

@ 200
The Hired...

@300
...Mercenary...

@450
...Of the Swordsman's Arts

Mizu Village
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Located on a small island in the middle of a large lake, the inhabitants of Mizu Village have the power to manipulate water.
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Village item: Undine's Sacred Tears
effect: heals team for 5 health and removes burning afflictions on targets.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 1
classlist: tactic + instant

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Mizu Konton
HP: 90
Specialty: Assassination
achievement titles:
@50
The Raging...
@75
...Whirlpool...
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One of the most destructive members of the village, Konton's abilities specialize in the offensive manipulation of water.
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Konton is a late-teens male, with turquoise eyes. His Robe is a midnight blue with multiple streaks of turquoise on it. has a blue mullet.
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skill#1: Ragint Torrent
One enemy takes 15 piercing ranged damage and will take 10 more damage from this skill next turn.
cost: 1 strength
cooldown: 0
classlist: ranged + instant

skill#2: White Water Crasher
Deals 5 piercing ranged damage to all enemies each turn for 3 turns, and if affected enemies use a skill, they will take 5 piercing ranged damage.
cost: 1 strength
cooldown: 4
classlist: ranged + chanelling

skill#3: Tsuname Rush
Deals 5 ranged damage to all enemies for 3 turns.
cost: 1 strength
cooldown: 2
classlist: ranged + channeling

Skill#4: Water Pillar
Makes Konton invulnerable for 1 turn.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant


Mizu Shibo
HP: 90
Specialty: Disruption
achievement titles:
@40
The Gorgeous...
@80
...Rainbow...
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The maiden of Undine's Shrine, Shibo specializes in tactics to confuse intruders.
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average-sized, wears turquoise kimono with deep blue waterdrops decorating it. turquoise eyes, and very long flowing, light blue hair. Has hairpins in the sides of her hair in the shape of waterdrops.
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Skill#1: Mystic Waterfall
Deals 10 ranged damage to all enemies and stuns their tactic skills for 1 turn.
cost: 1 intelligence
cooldown: 1
classlist: ranged + instant

Skill#2: Gleaming Rainbow
All enemies have their skill costs increased by 1 random energy for 2 rounds. this effect stacks.
cost: 1 intelligence + 1 random
cooldown: none
classlist: tactic + instant

skill#3: Heavy Mist
Disables invulnerability on all enemies for 3 turns. During this time, ranged damage dealt to affected enemies is increased by 5.
cost: 1 intelligence + 1 random
cooldown: 3
classlist: ranged + instant

skill#4: Misty Silhouette
Makes Shibo invulnerable for 1 turn.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant


Mizu Yawaragu
HP: 90
specialty: collaboration
achievement titles:
@65
...Dragon...
@100
... Of The Water
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Daimyo of Mizu Village, Yawaragu uses any means necessary to protect her people. Able to manipulate her water into the form a dragon to intimidate her foes and defend her allies, she is a strong member in any team.
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Matured woman, with ornate Kimono that looks like a flowing river. has earrings in the shape of dragons and her blue hair goes down to her shoulders. has turquoise eyes.
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Skill#1: Gentle Rain
For 3 turns, all burning afflictions are ignored and removed from ally and enemy teams.
cost: 1 wisdom
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant

skill#2: Water Dragon Guardian
For 4 turns, all allies take 20 less melee and ranged damage and deal 5 more melee and ranged damage
cost: 2 wisdom
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant

Skill#3: Water Imprisonment
Deals 15 ranged damage and stuns 1 enemy for 1 turn.
cost: 1 wisdom
cooldown: 1
classlist: ranged + instant

Skill#4: Water Dragon's Shield
Makes Yawaragu invulnerable for 1 turn
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant

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Village Achievements
titles:
@ 100
...of the Mizu

@ 200
The Dampened...

@300
...Servant...

@450
...Of Undine's Seas

White Guardian
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Shizen
HP: 110
specialty: Collaboration
achievement titles:
@65
The Fearless...
@100
... Of the Elements
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White Guardian of the region, Shizen is a man with much respect for the power of nature. was a well-respected leader of a reconnaissance team who was chosen to receive the powers of the Mizu and the Arashi villages.
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Matured man, short hair, light seafoam-green eyes, wears white minoko with yellow sleeves and turquoise streaks decorating it. somewhat tall and muscular.
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Skill#1: Nature's Wrath
deals 20 ranged damage and 10 piercing ranged damage to all enemies and disables invulnerability on affected targets for 1 turn.
cost: 1 strength + 1 intelligence
cooldown: 4
classlist: ranged + instant

skill#2: Elemental Shift: Water
Removes burning affliction each turn permanently. Elemental Shift skills share a cooldown and bypass invulnerability and counters, and end when another Elemental Shift skill is used.
cost: 2 random
cooldown: 3
classlist: tactic + aura

skill#3: Elemental Shift: Wind
Reduces enemy ranged damage by 5 permanently and if an energy draining skill is used on an ally, affected allies will gain 1 random energy each. Elemental Shift skills share a cooldown and bypass invulnerability and counters, and end when another Elemental Shift skill is used.
cost: 2 random
cooldown: 3
classlist: tactic + aura

Skill#4: Elemental Shift: Lightning
If an enemy uses a skill on any team member, that enemy will take 5 affliction damage, bypassing invulnerability. Elemental Shift skills share a cooldown and bypass invulnerability and counters, and end when another Elemental Shift skill is used.
cost: 2 random
cooldown: 3
classlist: tactic + aura
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Region Items:

Banner of Affliction:
If a team member uses a skill, they will deal 5 more affliction damage the following round.
classlist: passive + aura
cost: 120 gold

Well you haven't written much, but I will say WoN's technology level is not that advanced. It's not like Naruto where there's random bits of modern technology, it's like pre-western involvement Japan, where there is minimal technological advances that aren't drawn from China, so we have crossbows, and even gunpowder in its earliest stages, but it has minimal effective combat implementation, and even then ninja really have no need for it, they can generally do things much flashier. So this clan might need to be totally redone to take in the technological setting of War of Ninja.

While I don't mind the idea of having your second village split into two factions, with an unstable peace between them, I do think that perhaps an elemental village is not the best way to go about this. Another concept which can be diverged into two ideas may work beter, in my opinion. However, as there's not much story there at the moment, you might be able to prove me wrong, so we'll see where you go with this and I'll check back again then.


Now, on to balance, I'm ignoring the first clan for this because, as I said, they really just can't exist in the WoN world.

Tate: He seems fine, though his damage output is quite low. Maybe an extra 5 damage on Raging Tempest wouldn't hurt, but not entirely sure, with the disables he's a great support, so it would depend how he was played.

Isshun: I think maybe increase the damage and cooldown on Black Lightning, and AoE stun you can pull off every second turn is a bit much, even if it's not a full stun, IMO. Combine that with Yume and they can't do an aweful lot anymore.

Roar of the Thunder Gods needs a complete and total rework, end of story. You are not destroying protectors for no cost with a cooldown of 1. That would break any Shishi/Kamiko team without even trying, so rethink that skill.

Shibaru: Only thing I can say here is for Coming of Ragnarok, it should read:

If this skill is used again while it is active, Shibaru stuns and deals 15 piercing damage to all targets, and cancels Coming of Ragnarok.


Other than that, seems alright^^

Well you haven't written much, but I will say WoN's technology level is not that advanced. It's not like Naruto where there's random bits of modern technology, it's like pre-western involvement Japan, where there is minimal technological advances that aren't drawn from China, so we have crossbows, and even gunpowder in its earliest stages, but it has minimal effective combat implementation, and even then ninja really have no need for it, they can generally do things much flashier. So this clan might need to be totally redone to take in the technological setting of War of Ninja.

While I don't mind the idea of having your second village split into two factions, with an unstable peace between them, I do think that perhaps an elemental village is not the best way to go about this. Another concept which can be diverged into two ideas may work beter, in my opinion. However, as there's not much story there at the moment, you might be able to prove me wrong, so we'll see where you go with this and I'll check back again then.


Now, on to balance, I'm ignoring the first clan for this because, as I said, they really just can't exist in the WoN world.

Tate: He seems fine, though his damage output is quite low. Maybe an extra 5 damage on Raging Tempest wouldn't hurt, but not entirely sure, with the disables he's a great support, so it would depend how he was played.

Isshun: I think maybe increase the damage and cooldown on Black Lightning, and AoE stun you can pull off every second turn is a bit much, even if it's not a full stun, IMO. Combine that with Yume and they can't do an aweful lot anymore.

Roar of the Thunder Gods needs a complete and total rework, end of story. You are not destroying protectors for no cost with a cooldown of 1. That would break any Shishi/Kamiko team without even trying, so rethink that skill.

Shibaru: Only thing I can say here is for Coming of Ragnarok, it should read:

If this skill is used again while it is active, Shibaru stuns and deals 15 piercing damage to all targets, and cancels Coming of Ragnarok.


Other than that, seems alright^^

alright, I'll work on fixing up the characters. and I see what happened with Roar of the Thunder Gods, I was planing one effect, and changed my mind, but forgot to change the effect back. Again, this is a work in progress.

What if you had a charector who you can only unlock by getting all the other ones his name could be wakaziono

HP250 One attack could do 10 damage all the times and he takes 5 because of a bloodline disease

I like it :D Thumbs up mate

Okay, the region is finished now. give me your critiques and whatnot, I would sincerely appreciate a formal review of my villages and characters.