Foreword
This is for my close friend. Please be happy wherever you will go and whatever you will do, we will always be with you. I hope you like this poem I made so that you will never forget the bonds we have that will never ever fade.

Last walk to sanctty

Farewell, farewell my good old friend
You go and dance with a new pair in hand
Becoming new, becoming free
Becoming a brand new person that is free to be

The one we seek, so good and humble
You help us to be out of trouble
But now that you are in demise
That you believe the time is right
We will repay not by stopping you
But always saying we are behind you

Farewell my friend, Farewell to you
Always remember that we are with you
We grasp your hand in one last dance
So that you are happy in our romance
As friends not lovers but always remember
That our last dance was with each other


With all my heart, and all of us here, we will miss you....

That is so kind! He most have been a good friend.

Im sorry for your lose.

(Awesome poem! Thumb.)

Very nice, Thank you for sharing it with us.

dude i`m not gonna lie, that made me think of my best friend...
very nice and thumbed.

Thanks for all the comments guys, much appreciated.

Very Nice indeed. Im sure your friend is very happy and he will always look over you.

thanks guys

That poem is really good, but I see a problem: you always "rhyme" you with you. There are two ocorrences of that inside this poem. Maybe you should do an inversion and find another rhyme, eh?

Onto the feelings: you display what I'd call a "breezing poem". I'll explain. Me and my friend Hyon always discussed poetry. He used to write "breezing poems", the ones that felt soothing and calm. I'm used to write "thunder poems", the ones that are disturbing, dark and somewhat insane. Although I MUST say your poem is really good, I cannot rate it at all, because I'm not used to write "breezing poems". The rhymes are good, the metric is okay, you conveyed the message you wanted, the images are crystal clear. Still, I won't be able to rate this nor criticize. I'll just stay with this technical review.

emotionally powerful, rhythmic poem. thumbs up!

Thanks for all the great comments guys:smile

One of the best poems ive seen on any forum
Fantastic job!
~GENKI~

Great poem about friendship thumbs up mate :)

Arigato :D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@Taylor, you should try writing those kinds of poems. They're relaxing.

@Poem, It is being too artistic a few times. But, thank you for sharing with us this poem. I'm thumbing it up.

@Taylor, you should try writing those kinds of poems. They're relaxing.

@Poem, It is being too artistic a few times. But, thank you for sharing with us this poem. I'm thumbing it up.

I can't. It's not my style. I tend to cause Chaos and Havoc within my poems - changing styles, for me, is quite a farfetched experience.

I like talking about suffering, self-destruction, anger. Everything that people tend to hide. xD