Nobody knows me
Not really
Not even my family
Nobody GETS me
But, Him
How sad it is that they think they know me
Though they've only scratched the surface
They don't try and see what's underneath the underneath
Pretty lies and empty smiles
No one really cares
But, Him
Lying has become my sword
Pretending has become my shield
My voice is unheard
Although I feel I'm screaming
And no one is any wiser
But, Him
It frustrates me so
That he can read me so completely
As if I am an opened book
"You're crying from the inside"
Although I scoff, I believe him
I rave and scream
Falling apart on the floor
Crawling to the mirror
He stands with me
And in the reflection, instead of he and I
I only see me and suddenly it's clear
Nobody understands me
But, Him
Because "Him" is truly "Me"...

i like it.
i like all of the poems u have posted
u already posted like 3 or 4
post 1 a day or u will probrably receive a warning.

But there good and pretty deep

Nice poem
I like it

This one is really good.
The content is very interesting.
I have 2 question:
Did you write the poems on yourself?
Do the poems 'represent your life'?(show the poems your feeling?Yes or No.)

Yes, I wrote these poems based on myself, and they represent my life. Writing calms me down.

Okay, that's good to know.
It will be a better poem, if you write about your feelings or situations you had.

hmm not bad.. it may not be my position to give advice, but i do write poems too, so if i may, i think u should give the readers something to think about. For instance, making "him" subtle so as to give the readers a chance to deconstruct it in their own way that reflects urself too.