Topic: Rachel Riagan
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  Posted on March 9, 2011 21:15
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sammysowners, The Respected Commander of Ninja Arts

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Rachel Riagan :
Rachel is the daimyo of the Riagan clan.She is pretty brutal to her enemy and is deadly to be around.She hides and the shadows like a snake then kills her prey off.

Negative Aura:
Rachel gives the opponents team negative aura.Taking 1 energy from each person on the team for 1 turn.This skill has a starting cooldown of 3.

Cost:Intelligence,Random
Type:Mental,Aura
Cooldown:3

Blood pool:
Rachel insanely deals 10 bleeding affection damage to all characters on the field (Including herself and team) for 3 turns.This skill cannot be countered.This skill ignores invulnerable.

Cost:Strength
Type:Melee,Aura
Cooldown:4


Bloody cut:
Rachel deals 10 damage to 1 enemy and 10 bleeding damage to them.This skill turns into, "Full moon"

Cost:agility
Type:Melee,Instant
Cooldown:1

Human sacrifice:
Rachel sacrifices a teammate so the damage dealt to her would go to the selected teammate. (That teammate may not be invulnerable.)

Cost:Random
Type:Tactic,Instant
Cooldown:4


Alternate skill
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Full moon:
Spinning real fast with her sword Rachel deals 40 piercing damage to 1 enemy.This skill turns into "Bloody cut".

Cost:Strength
Type:Melee,Aura
Cooldown:0

  Posted on March 9, 2011 21:39
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Manjji-Puppet, The Innocent Serpent

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her incvul. lke skil isn't worth what you have to pay. Atleast lower the cooldown if you're going to make all the damage go to one teamate


You can't have normal names for these people, they need japanese names.

Blood Pool is way op, eve though it damages your team too.

6/10

  Posted on March 9, 2011 22:17
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GodSlayerMaster, The Respected Tactician of Hanto

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As Manjji-Puppet said, the name should be Japanese, I think it says so in the rules of this section.

I don't think Human Sacrifice skill is fair at all.

and blood pool might be OP. maybe a higher cost or not bypass invul or counters, idk. :laugh

  Posted on March 9, 2011 22:33
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Kabuto__Yakushi, The Twisted Harvester of Death

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Manjji-Puppet wrote:
her incvul. lke skil isn't worth what you have to pay. Atleast lower the cooldown if you're going to make all the damage go to one teamate


You can't have normal names for these people, they need japanese names.

Blood Pool is way op, eve though it damages your team too.

6/10
blood pool is definetely not overpowered - compare it to kamiko's hellfire rain and you know why...
the damage is 30 unpreventable AoE over 3 turns(which is a long time) and with a high cd - and in addition, it damages her own team, justifying the low cost...
actualy, it is a tad underpowered due to the VERY HIGH self damage

bloody cut is also WAY underpowered, just compare it to other skills and you know why

full moon on the other hand is a boring skill, which is tad weak, considering it costs much, makes her unable to use her "main" damaging attack(bloody cut) and needs a semi-prep... well, and its boring and not fitting within your characters style, so rework it to something interesting...

negative aura is absolutely broken IMO, so rework it.. do not feel like reasoning, think for yourself or ask me..

human sacrifice: well, kind of an intersting skill, though, i'd rework it to something completely different..... maybe something like"rachel deals 10 affliction damage to an ally to heal for 30 health" cost: 1 random cd: 3 or 4
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  Posted on March 9, 2011 23:11
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Nori, The Ultimate Veteran

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Or just remove it and improve bloody cut...like honestly, you don't need your character to have an extra skill, I say this all the time. There are four skill slots for a reason, and only characters who have a good reason to go outside of that go outside of that, and this character does not.
  Posted on March 10, 2011 01:32
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AlbusDumbledore, The Supreme Pacifist

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She's UP in my opinion. Wouldn't be good to have her in the team unless you have awesome healing abilities. Her+Kamiko=death. :laugh
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  Posted on March 10, 2011 01:42
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Kabuto__Yakushi, The Twisted Harvester of Death

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Nori wrote:
Or just remove it and improve bloody cut...like honestly, you don't need your character to have an extra skill, I say this all the time. There are four skill slots for a reason, and only characters who have a good reason to go outside of that go outside of that, and this character does not.
you are correct with that - 4 skill slots are usualy enough
though, on the other hand, such "shifting skills" are quite a nice addition, they give more variety to the characters without making them too versatile or OP - in n-a/s-a such alternate skills are used frequently and they are no problem, mostly just an advantage
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