Topic: Yoso Region

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  Posted on March 12, 2011 6:41 PM
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KeronOtakuAriri, The Drunken Medic of the BETA

Contribution: 21 (18 + 3)
Joined: March 3, 2010
Here are my thoughts for my second region, the Yoso region.

my custom regions:
Fuko Region
Yoso Region

NOTE(please read): Before you think the Izon village is a copy of Shishi, note that the Shishi clan has to make pacts with animals so that they can summon them whenever and wherever, whereas Izon Village requires no pact, but they can only bond with what animals are nearby, though some of them sometimes keep one as a pet/companion. Even still, I had this idea since the beta, so it's not copying any ideas already made, any resemblance was and is purely coincidental.


Izon Village
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All members of the village have the ability to communicate with animals. Each member usually has a preference over the kinds of animals they choose to use.
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Village item: Animal Feed
effect: recovers the holder for 5 health each turn. can only be used by Izon village members.
cost: none
cooldown: none
classlist: passive + aura

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Izon Nioi
HP: 90
Specialty: collaboration
achievement titles:
@50
Leader...
@75
...Of The Pack
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Nioi is a younger man in his village and hunts with the help of his hound, Doku. He specializes in recon missions, being able to warn the village of any incoming danger.
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Nioi is a medium-sized male, about late 20s, with scraggly brown hair and brown eyes. His outfit is a suit of leather battle armor, worn over a white shirt and pants. his hound is a small dog, beagle, with multi-colored patterns, the reds(brown), whites, and blacks.
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skill#1: Firce Fang
deals 15 melee damage to an enemy and affects target with a bleeding affliction dealing 5 affliction damage each turn for 2 turns
cost: 1 agility
cooldown: 0
classlist: Melee + instant

skill#2: Scent Follower
For 2 turns, all enemies have invulnerability disabled on them.
cost: 1 wisdom
cooldown: 3
classlist: Tactic + Channeling

skill#3: Ears of the Hound
Nioi's team is invulnerable to enemy melee and ranged skills for 1 turn.
cost: 1 intelligence + 1 wisdom
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant

Skill#4: Stealthy Maneuver
makes Nioi invulnerable for 1 turn.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant


Izon Karasu
HP: 80
Specialty: collaboration
achievement titles:
@40
The Soaring...
@80
...Eye in the Sky...
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Karasu is a mostly silent, but wise young woman, who helps Nioi on scouting missions. If dangers arises, she specializes in distracting her enemies before striking them from above when they aren't looking.
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wears dark brown robe, is in her late 20s, and has long black hair that separates into spikes farther down her back, the spikes on the side flow away in their respective directions also. has Brown eyes, and is usually seen with some sort of avian animal on her personage, usually an eagle accompanied by some ravens.
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Skill#1: Scouting Raven
For 3 turns, if an enemy uses a skill, it will not be invisible, and its target will be seen.
cost: 1 agility
cooldown: 3
classlist: tactic + instant

Skill#2: Eagle's Eyes
Alters Strike From Above for 3 rounds, making it ignore invulnerability and counters, and deal piercing damage.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant

skill#3: Strike From Above
Deals 15 melee damage to an enemy, and increases melee and ranged damage dealt to them by 5 this turn.
cost: 1 agility
cooldown: none
classlist: melee + instant

skill#4: Owl's Glare
Makes Karasu invulnerable for 1 turn.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant

Izon Kuma
HP: 90
specialty: assassination
achievement titles:
@65
The Ferocious...
@100
... Black Bear...
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Daimyo of Izon Village, Kuma is one of the strongest members of the village. His connection with Nature surpasses most in his clan, and is sometimes called an animal himself during battle.
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Old man, has some muscles, has a single long ponytail that reaches down to the middle of his back, is tall, though hunches over when there are no battles to fight. has brown eyes, and his robe is tan with black bear paw prints decorating it. He is almost always seen with a massive Black Bear by his side, named Kagu.
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Skill#1: Bear Claw Swipe
deals 15 melee damage to an enemy and disables invulnerability on them for 1 turn.
cost: 1 strength
cooldown: 1
classlist: melee + instant

skill#2: Flurry Fist
Deals 5 melee damage to an enemy for 3 turns, altering Bear Claw Swipe, making it deal triple damage during this time.
cost: 1 strength
cooldown: 2
classlist: melee + instant

Skill#3: Ferocious Roar
Deals 5 ranged damage to all enemies and destroys 10 points of protectors on them.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 2
classlist: tactic + instant

Skill#4: Animal Instinct
Makes Kuma invulnerable for 1 turn
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant

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Village Achievements
titles:
@ 100
...of the Izon

@ 200
The Feral...

@300
...Animal...

@450
...Of the Wild
  Posted on March 12, 2011 6:41 PM
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KeronOtakuAriri, The Drunken Medic of the BETA

Contribution: 21 (18 + 3)
Joined: March 3, 2010
Shunkan Village Village
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A people who are gifted with the ability to gain short bursts of extraordinary speed, they specialize is hand to hand combat, as opposed to the use of weapons. The village has a history with Izon village, but they are not quite allies.
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Village item: Armor of Hermes
effect: reduces cooldowns of the holder's skills by 1. this can only be equipped by the Shunkan clan.
cost: none
cooldown: none
classlist: passive + aura

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Shunkan Kyoki
HP: 110
Specialty: assassination
achievement titles:
@50
...Sadist...
@75
The Insane...
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Kyoki is a guard who is stationed outside of the village. He is the leader of the small guard outpost he is stationed at, and is incredibly dark and sadistic, though his ablility to lead the team and keep them in line has kept him his position.
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Middle-aged, pale skin, messy black hair, some of it covers his red eyes, wears cloak that is blood red, and a maroon-colored vest.
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skill#1: Swift Maneuver
Targets 1 enemy. Alters Swift Dragon Kick, and it will ignore invulnerability on target, destroy 15 points of protectors, and deal 10 more damage next turn.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 2
classlist: mental + instant

skill#2: Swift Dragon Kick
Deals 15 melee damage to an enemy.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 1
classlist: Melee + instant

skill#3: Sadistic Maniac
For 2 turns, if a target other than Kyoki is stunned, they will take 10 melee damage.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 3
classlist: melee + channeling

Skill#4: Dead Body Shield
makes Kyoki invulnerable for 1 turn.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant


Shunkan Myonashi
HP: 80
Specialty: disruption
achievement titles:
@40
The Unique...
@80
...Scholar...
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Myonashi is a shy boy who studies various parts of the human body to learn more about them. enjoys reading books, and is the son of Yugasa
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young, probably no more than 15 years old, small-sized, has short black hair and pink eyes. wears an over-sized grey shirt and dark red shorts, though his shorts are mostly covered up by the shirt.
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Skill#1: Pressure Point Strike
Drains 1 energy from a target each turn for 2 turns
cost: 1 intelligence
cooldown: 4
classlist: melee + instant

Skill#2: Gut Punch
Deals 15 melee damage to an enemy and stuns them for 1 turn.
cost: 1 wisdom
cooldown: 2
classlist: melee + instant

skill#3: Artery Block
Deals 10 melee damage and affects target with a bleeding affliction dealing 5 affliction damage each turn permenantly. this effect stacks.
cost: 1 intelligence
cooldown: 2
classlist: melee + instant

skill#4: Secret Hiding Spot
Makes Myonashi invulnerable for 1 turn.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant

Shunkan Yugasa
HP: 90
specialty: assassination
achievement titles:
@65
The Elegant...
@100
...Dancer...
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Daimyo of the Shunkan Village, and mother of Myonashi, Yugasa is praised for her beauty and judgement.
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Mid-40s, long black hair, has hair braided in the back, is very tall, wears black leggings, red shorts, a short orange skirt, and a yellow shirt. has Pink eyes.
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Skill#1: Tiger Dance
Deals 10 melee damage to an enemy permenantly. Can't be used while in effect and ends when Rose Thorn Dance or Lily Dance is used.
cost: 1 agility + 1 random
cooldown: 3
classlist: melee + instant

skill#2: Lily Dance
Deals 5 melee damage to all enemies permenantly. Can't be used while in effect and ends when Tiger Dance or Rose Thorn Dance is used.
cost: 1 agility + 1 random
cooldown: 3
classlist: melee + instant

Skill#3: Rose Thorn Dance
Permenantly, if an enemy uses a skill on an ally target, they will take 5 piercing melee damage, bypassing invulnerability and counters. This skill can't be used while in effect and ends whoen Tiger Dance or Lily Dance is used.
cost: 1 agility + 1 random
cooldown: 3
classlist: melee + instant

Skill#4: Turtle Dance
Makes Yugasa invulnerable for 1 turn
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant

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Village Achievements
titles:
@ 100
...of the Shunkun

@ 200
...Blur...

@300
The Speeding...

@450
...Of the Instance
  Posted on March 12, 2011 6:41 PM
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KeronOtakuAriri, The Drunken Medic of the BETA

Contribution: 21 (18 + 3)
Joined: March 3, 2010
Gisei Village
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A village of people who do not fear death, but refrain from fighting unless necessary. One reason for such restraint is because of their powerful, yet costly abilities. Their abilities use their own life force to create energy.
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Village item: Special Gisei Medicine
effect: reduces affliction dealt to holder by holder's skills by 5. Can only be held by a member of the Gisei.
cost: none
cooldown: none
classlist: passive + instant

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Gisei Tokibi
HP: 100
Specialty: collaboration
achievement titles:
@50
The Cold ...
@75
... Harvester ...
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Tokibi is one of Gisei's farmers. His farm is located near the West entrance of the village, and specializes in corn. His name can mean both "corn" and "winter beauty," which goes along nicely with his corny attitude, yet beautiful and cold outward appearance.
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Middle-aged, tanned, looooong brown hair, looks like he'd be eligible for a L'Oreal commercial, because he's worth it, cold brown eyes and facial expression, no facial hair, but is very friendly and caring, though tells too many corny jokes.
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skill#1: Dance of the Snowfall
deals 5 ranged damage to all enemies who will deal 5 less melee and ranged damage for 3 turns and Dance of the Avalanche can be used during this time. During this time, Tokibi takes 5 affliction damage each turn.
cost: 2 random
cooldown: 3
classlist: ranged + instant

skill#2: Dance of the Avalanche
Deals 30 ranged damage to an enemy who has their skill's cooldowns increased by 1 for 1 round, and Tokibi takes 10 affliction damage.
cost: 1 agility + 1 random
cooldown: 0
classlist: ranged + instant

skill#3: Corn Harvest
Limits melee and ranged damage to all team members to 30 for 3 turns. Tokibi takes 10 affliction damage each turn during this time.
cost: 1 Wisdom + 1 Agility
cooldown: 3
classlist: tactic + instant

Skill#4: Quick Reflexes
makes Tokibi invulnerable for 1 turn.
cost: 1 random
cooldown: 4
classlist: tactic + instant


Gisei Fusho
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@40

@80

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Gisei Higeki
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Village Achievements
titles:
@ 100
...of the Gisei

@ 200
...Sacrafice...

@300
The Inevitable...

@450
...Of the Living
  Posted on March 12, 2011 6:42 PM
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KeronOtakuAriri, The Drunken Medic of the BETA

Contribution: 21 (18 + 3)
Joined: March 3, 2010
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  Posted on March 12, 2011 6:43 PM
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KeronOtakuAriri, The Drunken Medic of the BETA

Contribution: 21 (18 + 3)
Joined: March 3, 2010
White Guardian

Yopparai
HP: 100
specialty: collaboration
achievement titles:
@65
The Rushing...
@100
... Of the Natural
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Yopparai is often seen drinking, but is the white guardian of the Yoso region. He was one of the instructors of battle for the former shogun's personal guards, and was given the Izon Village's power to communicate with animals, and the Shunkan Village's power of incredible speed. Often fights alongside the animals he calls to battle
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Very tall man who has one black eye and one white eye. He wears a green vest and yellow pants. has white hair in a single ponytail that reaches down to his waist, and some hair still flowing from the back of his head to his shoulders, and long, messy bangs that cover up a large portion of his face.
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Skill#1: Drunken Fist
Deals 10 melee damage to an enemy each turn permanently and Yopparai gains 15 points of damage reduction against melee and ranged skills, and ignores stuns. All skills share a cooldown, can not be used while in effect, and end when another skill is used.
cost: 2 Agility
cooldown: 3
classlist: melee + aura

skill#2: Monkey Palm Rush
Deals 5 melee damage to all enemies each turn permenantly and the ally team gains 15 points of damage reduction against melee and ranged damage. All skills share a cooldown, can not be used while in effect, and end when another skill is used.
cost: 1 agility + 1 intelligence
cooldown: 3
classlist: melee + aura

skill#3: Falcon Rush
Each turn, a different random enemy takes 15 piercing melee damage that bypasses invulnerability and counters. All skills share a cooldown, can not be used while in effect, and end when another skill is used.
cost: 1 agility + 1 strength
cooldown: 3
classlist: melee + aura

Skill#4: Cobra Strike
Permanently, Yopparai will deal 20 piercing melee damage to any enemy who uses a melee or ranged skill on a teammate. All skills share a cooldown, can not be used while in effect, and end when another skill is used.
cost: 1 Agility + 1 Wisdom
cooldown: 3
classlist: melee + aura
  Posted on March 13, 2011 12:41 AM
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Taylor, The Manipulative Tactician of the Darkness

Contribution: 980 (855 + 125)
Joined: February 19, 2010
Don't know why, but I think I've heard this animal story before... oh yeah, Shishi rings a bell!

Simplifying my criticizing and your work on reading - the idea is unoriginal. Even if the attacks were great (they're mostly okay, some of them are weak, but let's assume they were ASTOUNDING), this would spoil the entire work.

Therefore, I'll refrain myself from rating.
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  Posted on March 13, 2011 4:28 AM
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KeronOtakuAriri, The Drunken Medic of the BETA

Contribution: 21 (18 + 3)
Joined: March 3, 2010
Taylor wrote:

Don't know why, but I think I've heard this animal story before... oh yeah, Shishi rings a bell!

Simplifying my criticizing and your work on reading - the idea is unoriginal. Even if the attacks were great (they're mostly okay, some of them are weak, but let's assume they were ASTOUNDING), this would spoil the entire work.

Therefore, I'll refrain myself from rating.


And ninjas fighting each other isn't unoriginal either? Just because it has to do with animals does not make them a copy of Shishi. If you thought about the details, you'd see they are different.