Topic: Jiraiya Signature RATE+CNC
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  Posted on March 21, 2011 18:46
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Tar-Of-The-Light, The Raging Swordsman of the Military

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-Please CNC. I like CNC
-No rip without permission

JiraiyaSignature.png
tari.png
All sig credit goes to: DeadSight
ALL avy credit goes to: DeadSight

Graphics comes in many forms. What's bad in his eyes is probably the best in anothers. Everyone got diffrent tastes, so. - Quote by Aaron from Xat

  Posted on March 21, 2011 18:50
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Gon-Freacks, The Ultimate Hunter of Ninja Arts

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very good avatar you rock man 9/10
:amused

Edit:
I screwed up xD yeah I meant the sig
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  Posted on March 21, 2011 18:51
#3
Tar-Of-The-Light, The Raging Swordsman of the Military

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Joined: January 15, 2011
Gon-Freacks wrote:
very good avatar you rock man 9/10

Thanks.

But:
1: I did not made the avy. DeadSight did.
2: This is about the signature not the avy.

But if you meant 9/10 for the sig, then ´thank you very much :D
tari.png
All sig credit goes to: DeadSight
ALL avy credit goes to: DeadSight

Graphics comes in many forms. What's bad in his eyes is probably the best in anothers. Everyone got diffrent tastes, so. - Quote by Aaron from Xat

  Posted on March 21, 2011 18:53
#4
allanate, Warbringer

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5/10.
it looks like the render is just slapped onto the bg
theres no blending'
theres no flow
text is bad
near the left side of the image theres a line going verticly, it bugs me and it looks like the bg was too small st you just paste it again thus creating the line.

work on all things i just pointed out.

@Off topic:
how do you rip something with permission?

  Posted on March 21, 2011 18:53
#5
miso569, The Crystal Saint of the Darkness

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everything is perfect except that name taht is lame and plain.improve it up a bit and i will gove it 9/10
now its only for 7/10 sry

  Posted on March 21, 2011 18:54
#6
Tar-Of-The-Light, The Raging Swordsman of the Military

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allanate wrote:
5/10.
it looks like the render is just slapped onto the bg
theres no blending'
theres no flow
text is bad
near the left side of the image theres a line going verticly, it bugs me and it looks like the bg was too small st you just paste it again thus creating the line.

work on all things i just pointed out.

@Off topic:
how do you rip something with permission?

Off-topic answer: A typo im to lazy to correct.

And thanks for the CNC. Hope Encore will pwn this topic later.

EDIT: I noticed text is not good.. hmm.. Dead really was right when he said text was hard to master.
tari.png
All sig credit goes to: DeadSight
ALL avy credit goes to: DeadSight

Graphics comes in many forms. What's bad in his eyes is probably the best in anothers. Everyone got diffrent tastes, so. - Quote by Aaron from Xat

  Posted on March 21, 2011 18:58
#7
allanate, Warbringer

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Tar-Of-The-Light wrote:
(...)

Off-topic answer: A typo im to lazy to correct.

And thanks for the CNC. Hope Encore will pwn this topic later.

EDIT: I noticed text is not good.. hmm.. Dead really was right when he said text was hard to master.

well 6/10 text is hard to do anyway i take back my 5/10..........lucky:noworry

  Posted on March 21, 2011 19:00
#8
Tar-Of-The-Light, The Raging Swordsman of the Military

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allanate wrote:
(...)

well 6/10 text is hard to do anyway i take back my 5/10..........lucky:noworry

You didin't need to..

But thanks
tari.png
All sig credit goes to: DeadSight
ALL avy credit goes to: DeadSight

Graphics comes in many forms. What's bad in his eyes is probably the best in anothers. Everyone got diffrent tastes, so. - Quote by Aaron from Xat

  Posted on March 21, 2011 19:14
#9
xXxMarcelxXx, The Untouchable Champion of Death

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Try to improve the text.
7/10.

  Posted on March 21, 2011 19:25
#10
Encore, The Demonic Elite

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The render is just sitting there like it has no meaning to the sig, it needs to actually blend in, try to use the soft brush and erase some parts of the render, or add some fractals or the bubbles c4d's you had used and add it above the render layer. Yes there is flow, i can see it, try to involve the text and render a bit more towards the flow such as making some fractals above him and making it face towards the flow direction.


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What a hoe 'tis is.

  Posted on March 21, 2011 19:45
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DeadSight, The Raging Saint

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Tar-Of-The-Light wrote:
-Please CNC. I like CNC
-No rip without permission

JiraiyaSignature.png
Create more depth from foreground to background, at the moment, you're missing the foreground. Add effects and elements infront of the render, and blend them from the foreground to the focal, to the background. At the moment, the list would be as long as it would be for any starting graphics worker. So right now, my advice would be to start by learning your program then reading tutorials, preferably in this order...
Composition,
Flow,
Blending,
Depth,
Basic Effects,
Lighting,
Styles,
Cinema4dimensions,
Various Effects,
Style Integration,
Advanced Effects.


  Posted on March 21, 2011 23:12
#12
Chas3_Th3_Dr3am, The Swift Swordsman

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allanate wrote:
5/10.
it looks like the render is just slapped onto the bg
theres no blending'
theres no flow
text is bad
near the left side of the image theres a line going verticly, it bugs me and it looks like the bg was too small st you just paste it again thus creating the line.

work on all things i just pointed out.

@Off topic:
how do you rip something with permission?
Agree, also there is a laack of flow, blending, and composition.
4/10.
  Posted on March 22, 2011 15:59
#13
abininja, Kid, Winner of AotW #9

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I Guess I'm Too Late. :sad
Encore And Dead Already Raped The Topic :nuts
Anyways...What They Said Is The Most Appropriate.

  Posted on March 22, 2011 16:00
#14
-Je5u, Samurai of Ninja Arts

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It needs to be improved a little bit, maybe more colours...
6.5/10
If nothing seems to go right,
turn left! :teethFinland

  Posted on March 23, 2011 03:39
#15
orang, The Flaring Shadow of the BETA

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No flow or depth. Plain. 6.0
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