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  Posted on March 23, 2011 17:21
2 thumbs up
#1
crazymonkey3, The Dark Kid of Death

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roses are red,
violets are blue
yuki will hard right you
so will i too
rate it

thank you for that
you wont be mad
there will be new
so dont forget to view

i dont know why,
but you can try
wish you good luck
now give me a hug

lol i get only 10
im proud to be a man
thank you all
this poem is number 4

edit:thanks to all for the 10
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  Posted on March 23, 2011 17:30
#2
Tsugaga, The Untouchable VIP of the Shogunate

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crazymonkey3 wrote:
roses are red,
violends are blue
yuki will hard right you
so will i too
rate it

:laugh Nice monkey, you bring some nice laughs to the forum.

10/10


  Posted on March 23, 2011 17:32
#3
crazymonkey3, The Dark Kid of Death

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Tsugaga wrote:
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:laugh Nice monkey, you bring some nice laughs to the forum.

10/10

well thank you tsu
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  Posted on March 23, 2011 17:35
#4
shockkirby360, The Flaming Priestess of the Honoo

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roses are red,
your poem is great,
haters gonna hate,
i'll give you an 8
  Posted on March 23, 2011 17:41
1 thumbs up
#5
crazymonkey3, The Dark Kid of Death

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shockkirby360 wrote:
roses are red,
your poem is great,
haters gonna hate,
i'll give you an 8



thank you for that
you wont be mad
there will be new
so dont forget to view
SYMMETRY.jpg

  Posted on March 23, 2011 17:42
#6
-Je5u, Samurai of Ninja Arts

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OMG! people make awesome poems and I dun have any :'[
But great poem, 9.5/10 ^.^
If nothing seems to go right,
turn left! :teethFinland

  Posted on March 23, 2011 17:49
#7
crazymonkey3, The Dark Kid of Death

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-Je5u wrote:
OMG! people make awesome poems and I dun have any :'[
But great poem, 9.5/10 ^.^

i dont know why,
but you can try
wish you good luck
now give me a hug
SYMMETRY.jpg

  Posted on March 23, 2011 17:49
#8
-Rukia, The Manipulative Diva of the Hebi

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The first 4 lines are cheap, very cheap, in my humble opinion.
However, I love how you made it into too an original thing..:embarrassed 10/10 from me too. I like it very much. :)
Keep it up, Friend!
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  Posted on March 23, 2011 17:58
#9
Psychosis, Demon

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Thats just too epic <3 10/10
  Posted on March 23, 2011 17:58
#10
crazymonkey3, The Dark Kid of Death

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lol i get only 10
im proud to be a man
thank you all
this poem is number 4

i didnt think of a rime but thanks to all
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  Posted on March 23, 2011 18:59
#11
Manjji-Puppet, The Innocent Serpent

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nice
all I'm going to say
nice

  Posted on March 23, 2011 19:20
#12
rurudo66, Hunter of Hanto

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Eh... I think you mean "violets are blue," not "violends." I guess it's kind of humorous, but that's really it. Very simple, plain, not really much goin' on. I don't really like it, but I'm not going to rate it as I would normally rate poems because you would not like the results.
Epicurus wrote:
Is God willing to prevent evil, but not able? Then he is not omnipotent. Is he able, but not willing? Then he is malevolent. Is he both able and willing? Then whence cometh evil? Is he neither able nor willing? Then why call him God?
Marcus Aurelius wrote:
Live a good life. If there are gods and they are just, then they will not care how devout you have been, but will welcome you based on the virtues you have lived by. If there are gods, but unjust, then you should not want to worship them. If there are no gods then you will be gone, but will have lived a noble life that will live on in the memories of your loved ones.

  Posted on March 24, 2011 10:53
#13
candyguy1, The Respected Doctor, Top 1000 of PLS-1

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let me try one
roses are red
violets are blue
i'm going to win
and you gone lose
rate me
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  Posted on March 24, 2011 10:55
#14
crazymonkey3, The Dark Kid of Death

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candyguy1 wrote:
let me try one
roses are red
violets are blue
i'm going to win
and you gone lose
rate me

actually i won but my rate is 5 cause it hasnt got rimes and its simple
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  Posted on March 24, 2011 17:02
#15
Low, The Manipulative Shadow

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You're one crazy monkey, I'll give ya that. :)

But nice poem. I'll probably rate it around 6-7/10.
candyguy1 wrote:
let me try one
roses are red
violets are blue
i'm going to win
and you gone lose
rate me

Eh dude... you be stealing monkey's spotlight.
Not half bad, but as he said; probably five.