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  Posted on March 24, 2011 6:37 PM
#16
crazymonkey3, The Dark Kid of Death

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heres an other 1

roses are red
violets are blue
shugar is sweet
and so are you
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  Posted on March 24, 2011 7:18 PM
#17
rurudo66, Hunter of Hanto

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crazymonkey3 wrote:

heres an other 1

roses are red
violets are blue
shugar is sweet
and so are you


First of all, you spelled sugar wrong. Second, you did not make that up, that is the basis for any poem to goes "Rose are red / violets are blue..."
Epicurus wrote:

Is God willing to prevent evil, but not able? Then he is not omnipotent. Is he able, but not willing? Then he is malevolent. Is he both able and willing? Then whence cometh evil? Is he neither able nor willing? Then why call him God?

Marcus Aurelius wrote:

Live a good life. If there are gods and they are just, then they will not care how devout you have been, but will welcome you based on the virtues you have lived by. If there are gods, but unjust, then you should not want to worship them. If there are no gods then you will be gone, but will have lived a noble life that will live on in the memories of your loved ones.

  Posted on March 24, 2011 8:08 PM
#18
crazymonkey3, The Dark Kid of Death

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rurudo66 wrote:

(...)

First of all, you spelled sugar wrong. Second, you did not make that up, that is the basis for any poem to goes "Rose are red / violets are blue..."


this was made only for ppl to read till i come up whit the real one.otherwise i know its not mine
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  Posted on March 24, 2011 8:25 PM
#19
shockkirby360, The Flaming Priestess of the Honoo

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crazymonkey3 wrote:

heres an other 1

roses are red
violets are blue
shugar is sweet
and so are you[/quote

roses are red,
that poem is old,
you spelled sugar wrong,
i'll give you a 4.

  Posted on March 25, 2011 5:07 AM
#20
Low, The Crystal Warbringer

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Lemme make a poem.. :p

Rurudo is bad
but so am I
Dont mess with the best
You'll die like the rest

:p xD

rurudo.. no offense, this just struck me. LOL
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  Posted on March 25, 2011 4:45 PM
#21
rurudo66, Hunter of Hanto

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Low wrote:

Lemme make a poem.. :p

Rurudo is bad
but so am I
Dont mess with the best
You'll die like the rest

:p xD

rurudo.. no offense, this just struck me. LOL


Ha ha, it's fine. I can be a little critical of people's stories sometimes, but I only want to help people get better and for them to help themselves get better. You're a good writer, you just need some more practice and some more editing. The more you do it, the better you get, and I look forward to seeing you improve in the future.
Epicurus wrote:

Is God willing to prevent evil, but not able? Then he is not omnipotent. Is he able, but not willing? Then he is malevolent. Is he both able and willing? Then whence cometh evil? Is he neither able nor willing? Then why call him God?

Marcus Aurelius wrote:

Live a good life. If there are gods and they are just, then they will not care how devout you have been, but will welcome you based on the virtues you have lived by. If there are gods, but unjust, then you should not want to worship them. If there are no gods then you will be gone, but will have lived a noble life that will live on in the memories of your loved ones.

  Posted on March 25, 2011 5:15 PM
#22
Low, The Crystal Warbringer

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Boy... :tongue You are taking me a little bit too seriously.
:nuts I was being humorous, because all you do is criticize, from what I saw in the past few days. :blink


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  Posted on March 25, 2011 7:24 PM
#23
rurudo66, Hunter of Hanto

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Low wrote:

Boy... :tongue You are taking me a little bit too seriously.
:nuts I was being humorous, because all you do is criticize, from what I saw in the past few days. :blink


Yeash, I know. I did laugh, right? :amused Maybe I should have included mpore emoticons in my last post. :laugh Anyways, I was just trying to explain that I don't mean to offend people when I criticize. Your short poem was, inmy opinion, the best one on this thread, and certainly the most humorous. I don't mind if you want to make jokes at my expense, as long as it's all in good fun.:teeth
Epicurus wrote:

Is God willing to prevent evil, but not able? Then he is not omnipotent. Is he able, but not willing? Then he is malevolent. Is he both able and willing? Then whence cometh evil? Is he neither able nor willing? Then why call him God?

Marcus Aurelius wrote:

Live a good life. If there are gods and they are just, then they will not care how devout you have been, but will welcome you based on the virtues you have lived by. If there are gods, but unjust, then you should not want to worship them. If there are no gods then you will be gone, but will have lived a noble life that will live on in the memories of your loved ones.

  Posted on March 26, 2011 3:13 AM
#24
Low, The Crystal Warbringer

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Glad to know you enjoy yourself. xD
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  Posted on March 26, 2011 6:30 AM
#25
orang, The Flaring Shadow of the BETA

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Roses are red
Nuts are brown
Skirts go up
pants go down:embarrassed

I have more but they wouldn't be "appropriate"
7.9 on your btw :D
  Posted on March 26, 2011 6:06 PM
#26
crazymonkey3, The Dark Kid of Death

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here is 1 thats mine

give me thumbs up
so i can be a god
and buy a new dog
for my girfriend cause she is hot
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  Posted on March 26, 2011 9:01 PM
#27
Low, The Crystal Warbringer

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Uh... let me try some serious poetry. Do not get your hopes up though; never wrote a poem in my life :embarrassed

Heavens and the Hell,
Angels and Demons,
Good and Evil.

Sometimes I wonder,
What are these?

As I go about my life,
Im struck by it's dilemma.

Someone please put me on track,
Certainly I am a lost soul...

God Bless you,
and me.

I failed.
<<

A little something for readers. The ever original LOW. :teeth
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