The numbness of not being good enough like the Others,
to have the aesthetical woman who belongs to another,
For her my heart may be open to steal,
But I'm afraid our love will always be unreal,
So loneliness is most difficult to bare,
Without any vodka left to spare,
I'll stumble over to my chair,
I'd stand upon it and think how unfair,
To not be able to have the one I love
as I'd wrap the rope around my neck with a shove
To think of this world, so dark and gloom
As my chair would fall silently and end with a 'Boom'
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Posted on June 26, 2011 7:03 AM
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Posted on June 26, 2011 10:08 AM
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-Rukia, The Ambitious Priestess of the Hebi
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Your poem is very nice. I love it. You really pwn. 
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Edit: I am sorry if I got you wrong, but should you not have posted this in another section? And hence I don't really know what you want us to do with your nice poem, so I really am sorry if I did what you didn't want me to..
10Edit: I am sorry if I got you wrong, but should you not have posted this in another section? And hence I don't really know what you want us to do with your nice poem, so I really am sorry if I did what you didn't want me to..
Posted on June 26, 2011 1:21 PM
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I like it cool 8/10
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