Topic: Niiro Jun art by Firestorm

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  Posted on November 24, 2011 9:29 AM
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Firestorm, The Ruthless Inferno of the Honoo

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  Posted on November 24, 2011 9:48 AM
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Low, The Crystal Warbringer

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This looks nice. He just look so badass! :amazed
There's just one thing, the arms; they are disproportionate. :smile

Oh and, exceptional Paint Tool SAI skills.
  Posted on November 24, 2011 10:15 AM
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Inverse, The Raging Diva

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yeah low commented one some of the proprotions being kinda off/weird.
(i think he needs more of a neck or somthing? im not sure)

Do you have any moar arts to look at? would be kidna interesting to see more of your style.

Note: i really like his hair. Its pretty!
  Posted on November 24, 2011 10:18 AM
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Low, The Crystal Warbringer

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Inverse wrote:

yeah low commented one some of the proprotions being kinda off/weird.
(i think he needs more of a neck or somthing? im not sure)


Actually, the off/weird notion is not due to the neck. It's more do with the arm. The arm is of a longer and taller build while the body neck and head is of a strong build.
  Posted on November 24, 2011 10:18 AM
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Firestorm, The Ruthless Inferno of the Honoo

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Inverse wrote:

Do you have any moar arts to look at?

I do, but they are not of the WoN characters.

And arms are too hard to draw x)
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  Posted on November 24, 2011 10:56 AM
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crazymonkey3, The Dark Kid of Death

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THATS FREAKING AWESOME.

i want more.pls do more.its amazing.thumbs up.please do more :D
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Special thanks to Edeath.
  Posted on November 24, 2011 11:07 AM
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andytheo123, Prisoner

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AMAZING
Do more pls
Thumbed up

like a boss :cool :cool :cool
  Posted on November 24, 2011 5:18 PM
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MitzT, The Ultimate Tactician

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it's pretty good =) but his head is a little too big, and his arms a little too small,

maybe the head is not actually too big, but it seems that way because the head and body are in different poses I think.

still a really nice drawing though =)
  Posted on November 24, 2011 7:07 PM
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Squirtle, The Blue Elite of the Warrior Tortoise

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Hair is good, Head looks.... fat
Arms are weird...

But actually, i kinda like it (wary)

Good Job!
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Thankies low for da avatar :3
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  Posted on November 24, 2011 7:53 PM
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elamento12, The Demonic Child of the Firehawk

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Besides from that ugly ugly head it looks nice.
  Posted on November 24, 2011 8:27 PM
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Chas3_Th3_Dr3am, The Swift Swordsman

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The head seems so off with that angle, also Jun's neck looks very thick. Nice work on everything else though.
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  Posted on November 24, 2011 8:29 PM
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Sand_Spirit, Elite

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Were you working with graphics tablet?

It looks very nice.
  Posted on November 24, 2011 9:31 PM
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xXxMarcelxXx, The Untouchable Champion of Death

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Weird but nice. :amazed

Is it just made with Paint? The normal Paint? :huh
  Posted on November 25, 2011 1:50 AM
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DeathShadow, Gladiator

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It's alright, and good paint skills. Though you need to work on size and shape where as the head is too big and off, and the arms are weird.

@Marcel: He said what program he used below the picture.
  Posted on November 25, 2011 8:41 AM
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Firestorm, The Ruthless Inferno of the Honoo

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Thanks for your criticism. I'm going to draw Tadao and I'll try to fix all mistakes.
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