Poll: What do you think of her?

14 vote(s) since November 27, 2011 11:39 PM

  • Great! I love her! (6) (42.86%)
  • Eh, she's pretty good. (3) (21.43%)
  • She's Ok... (2) (14.29%)
  • I don't really care for her. (3) (21.43%)
 Topic: < Betraying Yugana by Manjji >

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  Posted on November 27, 2011 11:39 PM
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Manjji-Puppet, The Innocent Savior

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Since people are making different version of characters, I decided to make a Yugana, who betrayed the Kusa, as Jikkousu convinced her that it was the right path earlier. In an elaborate plot, Jikkousu faked her death with Yugana's help, and is now back to get everyone.

Comments/Feedback/Posts on the Topic are appreciated :smile

To do the mission to unlock her, first you would have to have finished the mission Severing the Roots. After doing this, you can go to the market to buy (for 175 tokens) the scroll:
"Vines of Betrayal"

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This unlocks the mission "A Missing War Dancer" which, upon completion will unlock another mission, which unlocks another, and so on and so forth until you get to the final mission.

Mission 1: A Missing War Dancer
• Win 3 battles in a row
• Win 1 battle with Kusa Niwa
• Win 1 battle with Kusa Kao
• 12 Collaboration Points (Minus 3)

Mission Dialogue: A Missing War Dancer wrote:

This dialogue begins in the Kusa Village.

large.jpg: (Insert Username)! Something's wrong! Yugana's been missing for 5 days! We think she's been abducted! Please (Insert Username), help us!

large.jpg: Niwa, calm down, everything will be fine. That being said, would you be willing to help us, (Insert Username)?

large.jpg: If it's ok with you, captain, then I think we should. Niwa, Kao, you said she's been missing for 5 days. What did she leave for in the first place?

large.jpg: She left on a mission to pick some herbs for our village's medics. This task normally would've taken her under an hour. She's yet to return though. I really can't think of any possible explanation.

large.jpg: Exactly where did she go to pick those herbs, Kao? I mean, did you search the area where she should've been?

large.jpg: Yes, we've sent a group of clan members to search the area. No success however. This whole situation feels fishy to me.

large.jpg: Ok, so we know she's not in the area where she was supposed to be picking the herbs. If that's the case though, what exactly would you like you us to do about it?

large.jpg: Normally, I'd think that extra help would prove to be a waste, and a setback. Yugana's too important to our clan's offensive line to lose though, and right now, I'm desperate for extra eyes to search for her. What I'm asking is that you'll lend you and your colleagues' attention toward searching for her. Assuming you're willing to help, please hurry!


Allows you to do the mission Blooming Traitor
3 Tokens

Mission 2: Blooming Traitor
• Win 2 battles with Kusa Niwa
• Win 5 battles with Kusa Kao
• 15 Assassination Points (Minus 3)
• 10 Disruption Points (Minus 2)

Mission Dialogue: Blooming Traitor wrote:

This dialogue begins in a forest near the Kusa Village.

large.jpg: Yugana! Thank goodness we found you! We were worried something had happened to you.

large.jpg: Kao, I'm going to ask that you pretend you never saw me, and walk away.

large.jpg: Yugana, what do you mean? You're talking nonsense, don't you realize that?

large.jpg: Kao, don't make me repeat myself. When I left, I left the village not as a mission, but because I wanted to leave. I have no plans of coming back. Please, again, leave, and forget we even had this encounter.

large.jpg: Yugana! What's going on? What's wrong with you? Can you even hear what you're saying right now? Seriously, just come back with us!

large.jpg: Niwa, I'm not coming. I don't have time to waste arguing though, so I'll tell you exactly what's going on. I've betrayed the Kusa, by assisting Jikkousu in faking her death. Now, before things become unpleasant, I'll be leaving.

large.jpg: YUGANA!!

large.jpg: Kao, what do we do now? I mean, do we follow her?

large.jpg: No. Although it pains me to think of Yugana as an enemy and traitor, that's what she is. As of right now, our current objective is to capture her, or if that's not possible, kill her.

Allows you to do the mission The Dance of Doom
4 Tokens


Mission 3: The Dance of Doom

• Win 5 battles with Kusa Niwa or Kusa Kao
• Win 3 battles with Kozan Jikkousu, Kozan Hai, or Kozan Hahen
• Win 2 battles in a row with Kusa Niwa or Kusa Kao
• 8 Collaboration Points (Minus 1)
• 8 Disruption Points (Minus 1)
• 8 Assassination Points (Minus 1)

Mission Dailogue: Dance of Doom wrote:

This dialogue begins in the Kusa Village.

large.jpg: You people have such simple minds. You're all scrambling over Yugana betraying the Kusa. I see something much more significant though.

large.jpg: Sainan! I've noticed too, but you need not be so blunt about it. Try to be a little more considerate with your words next time.

large.jpg: What are you two even talking about?

large.jpg: Think about what Yugana said. She helped fake Jikkousu's death, meaning...

large.jpg: That witch is still alive and well!

large.jpg: Ok, now that you guys understand my concern, what do we do about it?


Allows you to do the mission Vines of Betrayal
5 Tokens


Mission 4: Vines of Betrayal

• Win 3 battles with Kusa Niwa or Kusa Kao versus Kusa Yugana
• Win 3 battles in a row with Kusa Niwa or Kusa Kao
• 12 Disruption Points (Minus 4)
• 10 Collaboration Points (Minus 3)
• 8 Assassination Points (Minus 2)

Mission Dialogue: Vines of Betrayal wrote:

Dialogue begins in the forest between the Hermit Shop and Kusa Village.

large.jpg: So, you've finally found us. What's your plan now though? Kill us? Perhaps you forgot that I can manipulate aging. That's not all though.

large.jpg: That may be true, but you couldn't possible target us all at once, could you?

large.jpg: You're quite arrogant. That being said, you're quite right. In addition to my power however, Yugana will fight against you too.

large.jpg: I myself could defeat Yugana without anyone else's help. How do you think we'll lose, even with her fighting us?

large.jpg: Ha! While you may have been able to defeat me back then, I now harbor more power than you can imagine, all thanks to Jikkousu. Yes, now you get it; I have an aging crystal, which with my war-dancing, can easily crush you, Kao.

large.jpg: Only one way to know for sure... Attack!


Allows you to do the mission The Dancing Devil
6 Tokens


The Dancing Devil
• Win 1 battle against Betraying Yugana (Boss)
(I might make a skillset for her, but I haven't yet)

Unlocks Betraying Yugana
7 Tokens


OK, now on to Yugana's skillset.


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Betraying Kusa Yugana
Collaboration
90

Yugana has left the Kusa, after deciding to help Jikkousu. She's become ever so much stronger due to Jikkousu's help, and now hosts more power than ever before.

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Snarling Vines
Yugana combines her plant manipulation with Jikkousu's aging crystal given to her.
Yugana deals 10 affliction damage to one enemy. If they use a skill next turn, their cooldowns will be increased by 2 for 2 turns.* If they don't use a skill next turn, the target will take another 10 affliction damage.
*Only one increase can be active at a time. If used while a cooldown increase is in effect, they will take 20 affliction damage instantly.

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cooldown: 1
class list: mental, instant

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Blossoming Desperation
Yugana uses her enemies' pain, and converts it into life for her allies.
For 3 turns, each time an enemy takes 20 or more damage, Yugana and her allies will heal for 5 health.

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cooldown: 3
class list: tactic, channeling*
*If Yugana is stunned during use, it will have no effect that turn. When the stun ends, however, the skill will take effect again.

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Dance of the Petals
Yugana scatters her body into a horde of petals, confusing her enemies.
For 1 turn, each enemy that uses a skill will be stunned for 1 turn. This is invisible.

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cooldown: 2
class list: tactic, instant

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Peace of Mind
Yugana turns the remains of her energy into a flower which brings peace to her.
This skill makes Betraying Yugana invulnerable for 1 turn.

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cooldown: 4
class list: passive, aura

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Reworks
What I'm going to do for this is post the previous ways she's been.

v.1:

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Snarling Vines
Yugana combines her plant manipulation with Jikkousu's aging crystal given to her.
Yugana deals 10 affliction damage to one enemy. If they use a skill next turn, their cooldowns will be increased by 2 for 3 turns.

cost:energy_2.gif
cooldown: 3
class list: mental, instant

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Blossoming Desperation
Yugana uses her enemies' pain, and converts it into life for her allies.
For 3 turns, each time an enemy takes 25 or more damage, Yugana and her allies will heal for 5 health.

cost:energy_2.gif
cooldown: 3
class list: tactic, channeling*
*If Yugana is stunned during use, it will have no effect that turn. When the stun ends, however, the skill will take effect again.

Dance of the Petals
Yugana scatters her body into a horde of petals, confusing her enemies.
For 1 turn, each enemy that uses a skill will be stunned for 1 turn. This is invisible.

cost:energy_3.gif energy_random.gif
cooldown: 2
class list: tactic, instant

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Peace of Mind
Yugana turns the remains of her energy into a flower which brings peace to her.
All remaining energy in Yugana's energy pool will be used on this passively if she doesn't use a skill. For every energy used, she will gain 5 damage reduction, and heal 5 health. This damage reduction lasts 1 turn.

cost: energy_random.gif
cooldown: none
class list: passive, aura
  Posted on November 27, 2011 11:54 PM
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lucaslost, The Lost Wolf of the Winter

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Considering 2nd skill has some drawbacks, I suggest one less cooldown.
The rest is pretty nice, considering she's a really supportive char, but slow damager nonetheless.
She is borderline UP due to her low damage output, but she'd pwn with Jatai and Nori.
Gets a (drums) 9/10 from me! :D


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  Posted on November 27, 2011 11:57 PM
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Manjji-Puppet, The Innocent Savior

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lucaslost wrote:

Considering 2nd skill has some drawbacks, I suggest one less cooldown.
The rest is pretty nice, considering she's a really supportive char, but slow damager nonetheless.
She is borderline UP due to her low damage output, but she'd pwn with Jatai and Nori.
Gets a (drums) 9/10 from me! :D


Ok, I editted the cooldown of the second skill. Also, how about the first skill can be used on someone currently marked once by it, dealing 20 affliction damage with no cooldown? So basically, after dealing the first effect, that enemy's the only one able to be targetted until 3 turns are up?
  Posted on November 28, 2011 12:18 AM
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Clessenur, The Great Demon of Santi

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The cooldowns destroy her completely, then there's the passive which would be quite funny with AoE stun...

Boost all skills cooldowns(yes all of them) and rework the passive a bit.
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  Posted on November 28, 2011 12:26 AM
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Manjji-Puppet, The Innocent Savior

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Clessenur wrote:

The cooldowns destroy her completely, then there's the passive which would be quite funny with AoE stun...

Boost all skills cooldowns(yes all of them) and rework the passive a bit.


The 2nd and 3rd skills would be overpowered if their cooldowns were less, and UP if they were any more. She was a bit slow though. I've reworked her attack now.

edit: I didn't like how similar it looked to the first one, so I reworked it a little bit further yet.
  Posted on November 28, 2011 4:18 AM
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Squirtle, The Blue Elite of the Warrior Tortoise

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Really creative, i love it! ^^
She's perfectly balanced.
Everything is perfect, great job!
10/10
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  Posted on November 28, 2011 6:51 AM
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LosenFlowers, The Red Blossom of the Kusa

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I wish I could only be as creative as you!

Your Yugana is perfectly balanced, extremely creative and is one of the greatest chars ive seen.

10/10 Thumbs Up!
Retired for an unknown period of time
Love ya Lucaslost, totally love the avy!

(Lucaslost made my avy if you couldn't work that out...-.-")
  Posted on November 28, 2011 12:45 PM
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andytheo123, Prisoner

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I thinks she is UP
Her only ok skill is Dance of Petals
like a boss :cool :cool :cool
  Posted on November 29, 2011 12:34 AM
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Manjji-Puppet, The Innocent Savior

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◄•/•/•|•\ Update /•|•\•\•►

I've created a template, and filled it with what it could look like.

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Additionally, I've crafted a rough draft of what the missions could be. I'll make dialogue soon.
  Posted on November 29, 2011 3:53 PM
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Demonkings, The Golden Demon of the Darkness

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Manjji-Puppet wrote:

◄•/•/•|•\ Update /•|•\•\•►

I've created a template, and filled it with what it could look like.

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Additionally, I've crafted a rough draft of what the missions could be. I'll make dialogue soon.


Oh my god! Why haven't I thought of creating something like that before!

Anyways for the skills they are Alright but blooming seems to be a little up, maybe also give damage reduction too?

Dance of the petals = Daimyo Takeo's Hypnosis = Kabuto's genjutsu skill

I guess everyone likes his skill

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  Posted on November 30, 2011 12:06 AM
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Manjji-Puppet, The Innocent Savior

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Demonkings wrote:

(...)

Oh my god! Why haven't I thought of creating something like that before!

Anyways for the skills they are Alright but blooming seems to be a little up, maybe also give damage reduction too?

Dance of the petals = Daimyo Takeo's Hypnosis = Kabuto's genjutsu skill

I guess everyone likes his skill

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Thanks! :)

Also, I have an .xcf file (gimp) in which all you have to do is edit the text layers and type, rather than smudging away all the other text, and trying to place it right. I'll email it to anyone who wants it.
  Posted on December 1, 2011 2:27 AM
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Manjji-Puppet, The Innocent Savior

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Bumping this.

Also, any suggestions for a new character to make?
  Posted on December 1, 2011 10:57 AM
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Demonkings, The Golden Demon of the Darkness

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Manjji-Puppet wrote:

Bumping this.

Also, any suggestions for a new character to make?


Maybe something like Young Yuurin? During those times when he fought Byakko.

the missions could be something like

A story of the past
Win 5 battles with Yuurin
Win 3 battles with Jikkousu(She was with yuurin in the past)

The greatest challenge
(If byakko ever becomes a playable character and boss)
Win one battle against Byakko (boss)


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  Posted on December 2, 2011 9:40 PM
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Manjji-Puppet, The Innocent Savior

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Bump

Also Mission Dialogues coming soon.
  Posted on December 4, 2011 1:30 PM
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Demonkings, The Golden Demon of the Darkness

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Manjji-Puppet wrote:

Bump

Also Mission Dialogues coming soon.


Oh my god you even did the dialogues!!! Your Awesome!and you even made cameos of the kemuri and budou in them! Great :nuts :nuts :nuts
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