Ok, so the last new thing I made, Betraying Yugana went over so well, I decided to make another, based on one of my favorite characters ingame, Shishi Nori. This storyline advances through Nori completely finishing her training with Ookami.

To do the mission to unlock her, first you would have to have finished the mission King of Kings. After doing this, you can go to the market to buy (for 175 tokens) the scroll:
"A New Maiden of the White Wolf"



This unlocks the mission "The Maiden's Desperation" which, upon completion will unlock another mission, which unlocks another, and so on and so forth until you get to the final mission.

Mission 1: The Maiden's Desperation
• Win 3 battles in a row
• Win 1 battle with Shishi Takeko
• Win 1 battle with Shishi Toraji
• 12 Collaboration Points (Minus 3)

This dialogue begins in the Shishi Village.

: (Insert Username), thank you for coming so soon. Nori would like to speak with you.

: (Insert Username), it's much appreciated that you came at such short notice. As you were told in the message, I'm in need of your help.

: What exactly do you need help with, Nori?

: When the battles against Hahen, Hai, and Jikkousu were going on, I realized just how much I relied upon Ookami, and it worried me...

: Come on, Nori, get to the point!

: Saigai! Show some respect!

: No, Arasoi, it's alright. Anyways, what I'm trying to say is, I wish to train to become stronger, so that I can fight without Ookami.

: So how do you plan on training, and how exactly do you want us to help with the process?

: If you'll agree, I've got a few ideas... So, (Insert Username) will you do me this huge favor?

Allows you to do the mission Nori's Conviciton
3 Tokens

Mission 2: Nori's Conviction
• Win 2 battles with Budou Nobuo
• Win 2 battles with Shishi Takeko
• Win 5 battles with Shishi Nori
• 15 Collaboration Points (Minus 3)
• 10 Disruption Points (Minus 2)

This dialogue begins in the Shishi village.

: Nori, you're strong, but you must concentrate! You can't lose focus, or your enemy will kill you easily, even with Ookami by your side!

: You're right, Ken. Thank you for the words of wisdom. Care for another round?

: Nori, you'll kill yourself if you continue at this rate. You need to rest, and until you do, I refuse to train you.

: How about you, Nobuo, will you help with me training?

: As long as it's ok with Captain (Insert Username).

: And you, Takeko?

: You know you don't even have to ask, Nori!

: Ok then, let's begin!

Allows you to do the mission Ookami Speaks
4 Tokens

Mission 3: Ookami Speaks

• Win 3 battles with Shishi Toraji
• Win 5 battles with Shishi Takeko or Shishi Nori
• Win 2 battles in a row Shishi Nori
• 8 Collaboration Points (Minus 3)
• 4 Disruption Points (Minus 3)
• 4 Assassination Points (Minus 3)

This dialogue beings in the Shishi Village.
: Nori, why do you insist on training? You know we both fight together better as a team!

: Ookami, I won't always be able to summon you in an instant's notice, don't you get it? I need to be able to independently fight!

: You humans, so persistent. If you really want to get me to go along with this, you, Takeko, and especially that faux-Shishi Toraji must prove yourselves to me!

: That we will, Ookami!

Allows you to do the mission The Hardships of Training
5 Tokens

Mission 4: The Hardships of Training
• Win 7 battles with Shishi Nori
• Win 3 battles in a row with Shishi Nori
• 12 Collaboration Points (Minus 4)
• 10 Disruption Points (Minus 3)
• 4 Assassination Points (Minus 2)

This dialogue begins in the Outskirts of the Shishi Village.

: Urghh, this training is so hard!

: Nori, you should probably take a break. I can bandage up some of your wounds so they'll heal better.

: Jinsei, I'm sure Nori appreciates the notion, but no. I know- and I'm sure Nori does as well- that if she's to complete this training, she's not going to get a chance to take a breath.

: Nori, talk some sense into Toraji, will ya'?

: No, Jinsei, he's right, I can't stop if I intend to become stronger, whether or not my thighs burn, my mind throbs, and my cuts sting.

: Jinsei, don't argue over it, Nori and Toraji are right. These are just the Hardships of Training.

Allows you to do the mission A New Maiden of the White Wolf
6 Tokens

Final Mission: A New Maiden of the White Wolf
• Win 10 battles with Shishi Nori
• Win 5 battles with Shishi Nori against any Shogun Army, Budou, Kemuri, Aoiro, Niiro, Kage, or Senboku (clan in most cases) members, or Yuzuki
• Win 5 battles with Shishi Nori against any Honoo, Kusa, or Kozan clan members, or Yuurin
• Win 3 battles in a row with Shishi Nori
• 15 Collaboration Points (Minus 5)

This dialogue begins in the Shishi Village.


: Yaaahhhh!

: Good Nori! Your speed is getting so much faster, and your strength! This exponential increase in your power is incredible!

: Your parrying skills as well! I'm actually trying to match you, and you're putting up quite a good fight!

: Thank you, Yuzuki, and Yuudai! Your help is very useful, and without it, I probably wouldn't be improving by near as much!

: I must say, your stealth is admirable, Nori.

: You can say that again, Shogi!

: Yes, Nori, you're doing superbly! So... NOW can I bandage you up?

: She's become stronger, but she's not completely done with her training.

: That's right, Takeko, but I'm almost done. This last part of my training will be the hardest though. That being said, I'm going to give this final stretch all I've got!

Unlocks Fully Trained Nori
7 Tokens

OK, now on to her skillset.


Fully Trained Nori
Collaboration
80
Nori has trained extensively to become stronger both with Ookami at her side, and without his assistance.



Chilling Ookami Presence
Nori summons Ookami, and with him comes snow, which effects some enemies.
Nori gains 35 protector points. Until this is destroyed, any enemy that uses a melee skill on her will take 5 affliction damage, and will take 5 more damage from Nori's skils permanently. While the protector is actice, Volt Fang is altered.


cost:
cooldown: 4
class list: tactic, instant


Ookami Protection
Ookami comes to protect Nori from any harm, while also protecting her team.
Nori and her teammates become invulnerable to melee and ranged skill for 1 turn. They also gain 15 protecter points. Next turn, Volt Fang will do it's alternate effect.

cost:
cooldown: 4
class list: tactic, instant


Volt Fang
After training, Nori now can attack even without Ookami.
One enemy will take 10 damage, and take 5 bleeding affliction damage for 2 turns. If used one turn after Ookami Protection, or during Chilling Ookami Presence, this skill will deal piercing damage, and will remove 1 energy, plus the amount of energy that enemy used last turn.* If this skill removes energy, it will gain a cooldown of 1 for 1 turn.
*If they didn't use a skill, or used a skill requiring no energy, only 1 energy will be removed.

cost:
cooldown: none/1
class list: melee, instant


Ookami Leaping
Nori jumps up on Ookami and away they gallop, escaping the battle.
Makes Fully Trained Nori invulnerable for 1 turn.

cost:
cooldown: 4
class list: tactic, instant

Not so original, but she's kinda kewl.
First skill is UP, second is OP, third is balanced, and last is balanced as well.
I guess I can call it a balanced char, but try improving originality on your next char.

I agree with Lucas but it is kinda original.

Ok, I've changed her attack completely.
What do you guys think?

Hmmm... the attack is OP itself, but she doesn't deal any damage by herself, so she's UP
Imagine 1 vs 1 against... well, almost all chars (almost every char who can manage to put a protector can defeat her)

Editted the attack AGAIN

Edit: I wasn't paying attention when I changed her attack, but now it's right. It costs only 1 agility, with 1 cooldown, not 5

edit 2:

Made the mission template thingee:

Nori's skills are cheap, and they look amazing to be honest.

Chilling Ookami Presence
"Chilling Ookami Presence
Nori summons Ookami, and with him comes snow, which effects some enemies.
Nori gains 30 protector points. Until this is destroyed, any enemy that uses a melee skill will take 10 affliction damage, and will take 5 more damage from Nori's skils permanently, Volt Fang is altered."

"some enemies" is what's bothering me. That means out of a team of a ranged, melee and mental user, the skill could affect everyone except the melee user. Or do you mean to say the 10 affliction and the 5 DI is affected only to the target that uses a melee skill?

Other than that, I also feel the protector could use a boost. A 35 HP protector maybe.

Ookami Protection looks underpowering. To think that we have SB which does the same thing for one random..

Volt Fang sounds like a low damaging move. And it costs one green. This would not always work out. The damage maybe piercing, but there are ways to stun and effectively bring Nori to a stand still. Either increase the damage or rework the skill altogether. Like the bit where it no longer requires a summon to do the damage.


Overall, a splendid character I must say. Ookami's Presence, I liked it very much! O: I just think she's prone to a lot of things.. stuns and counters being the major setbacks..

first of all, the picture of nori isnt so cute in this part, so no and hmm this character would make the game unbalanced

Nori's skills are cheap, and they look amazing to be honest.

Chilling Ookami Presence
"Chilling Ookami Presence
Nori summons Ookami, and with him comes snow, which effects some enemies.
Nori gains 30 protector points. Until this is destroyed, any enemy that uses a melee skill will take 10 affliction damage, and will take 5 more damage from Nori's skils permanently, Volt Fang is altered."

"some enemies" is what's bothering me. That means out of a team of a ranged, melee and mental user, the skill could affect everyone except the melee user. Or do you mean to say the 10 affliction and the 5 DI is affected only to the target that uses a melee skill?

Other than that, I also feel the protector could use a boost. A 35 HP protector maybe.

Ookami Protection looks underpowering. To think that we have SB which does the same thing for one random..

Volt Fang sounds like a low damaging move. And it costs one green. This would not always work out. The damage maybe piercing, but there are ways to stun and effectively bring Nori to a stand still. Either increase the damage or rework the skill altogether. Like the bit where it no longer requires a summon to do the damage.


Overall, a splendid character I must say. Ookami's Presence, I liked it very much! O: I just think she's prone to a lot of things.. stuns and counters being the major setbacks..

I'm thinking about how to reword her first skill, ik it sounds funny.

@the Smokebomb comment, the thing is, that has an infinite cooldown. This can be used more than one time.

also, I removed the cooldown, and I'm thinking about making it ignore counters.

Thanks for the feedback, low!

Edit:
@ceed
First off, the pictures aren't what they'd actually be, their just there to add some visual effect.

and what's unbalanced about her? Please be more specific

What the! I was about to create my Nori too but you created her already. *sigh* Oh well.

Anyway she seems pretty weak due to her protector only giving 30 hit points and her attack costing one melee for 10 piercing but its alright during protector i guess.

Maybe the protector can reduce like 10 damage to nori?

What the! I was about to create my Nori too but you created her already. *sigh* Oh well.

Anyway she seems pretty weak due to her protector only giving 30 hit points and her attack costing one melee for 10 piercing but its alright during protector i guess.

Maybe the protector can reduce like 10 damage to nori?

I thought with the additional effects it would even out. I forgot the original Nori's boosts cooldowns too however. I'm thinking about giving her a general bump of 5 in protector, up to 35.

Also, I editted the attack, so it will always remove at least 1 energy. Now, it removes 1, plus the amount they used the last turn. Now I think it'll be strong enough.

thanks for the feedback!

I like her now.
Nice work Richard :D

I like her now.
Nice work Richard :D

Thankies lucas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bump

Awesome character. Abit overpowered but nice and original design.