Poll: What do you think ?

14 vote(s) since December 8, 2011 1:45 AM

  • it's awesome (7) (50%)
  • it's good (6) (42.86%)
  • it's regular (1) (7.14%)
  • it's bad (0) (0%)
  • it's horrible (0) (0%)
 Topic: Clan Senzo

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  Posted on December 8, 2011 1:45 AM
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#1
Brielga, Apprentice of the Tiger King

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Joined: March 9, 2010
Clan Senzo
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Clan Descripion: The clan Senzo who Believes in the power of spirits and ancestors is an extremely religious people, is a place surrounded by swamps, which spies and intruders away, the legend says that all who die in clan Senzu their spirits are in the swamps. the people are very united and they do not usually leave their village, however protect themselves with all their strength when they are attacked.

Titles:
at 150 pts -> ...of the Senzo
at 250 pts -> ...spiritualist...
at 350 pts -> The immaterial...
at 425 pts -> ...of Souls

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Characters:
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Name: Senzo Sayuki
Health:90
Speciality: Assassination

Description: Sayuki is a spy of Senzu clan, was trained from an early age, losing much of her childhood, her training was rigorous and difficult, over time she became a incredibly ninja and focused. She has the power to conjure up ghosts who always talk and help her,Sayuki also has her amazing glove inherited from her master.



Aparence:Sayuki is 20 years old, short hair, and peaked blonde, green eyes, her clothes looks like the sainnan, however is entirely white.she is a short girl



Skills:

Spectral blade: Sayuki creates a immaterial blade from her glove.Sayuki deals 40 piercing melee damage to one enemy. This enemy can't be invunerable and reduce damage on the next turn. This skill only can be use during
gauntlet of spirits.
energy: energy_1.gif energy_2.gif
cooldown: 1 turn
Class list: melee,instant

Ghost: for three turns Sayuki drains 5 health points,and melee and ranged skills dealt to this character are reduced by 5.this skill can't be used on an enemy already afected.
energy: energy_random.gif
cooldown: 0
Class list: mental,aura


Gauntlet of spirits: sayuki prepare her glove, infinitely she can used spectral blade.grants one randon energy when actived.
energy: none
cooldawn: infinite
Class list: Tactic,instant


Sayuki Evasion: Makes Sayuki invulnerable for one turn.
energy: energy_random.gif
cooldown: 4
Class list: tactic,instant


Titles:
at 30 pts -> The invisible…
at 80 pts -> …spy…

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Name: Senzo Daka
Health:80
Speciality: Collaboration

Description: Daka is a ritualist, who devotes his life to find a ritual that can revive his wife, he spends most of the time locked in the basement of his house praying and testing various rituals, he is going crazy over time. after all he is very important to the clan.


Aparence: Daka has 27 years, long black straight hair, clothing entirely black with a huge silver ceoss-shaped necklace, thin and very thin face, black eyes.



Skills:

Ritual: healing circle: Daka heals one team member for 35 health and all ki affliction on the target are removed.
energy: energy_random.gif energy_random.gif
cooldown: 2
Class list: tactic,instant


Spirit Guardian: Daka conjures a guardian to protect one team member.For one turn all ranged and melee skills used on the target are contered and the enemies takes 15 melee damage.This skills is invible to the enemy.if countered this skill is on cooldown for 1 turn.
energy: energy_random.gif
cooldown: 0
class list: mental,aura


Ritual: Change of vitality: Daka marks one enemy, next turn the health of Daka is changed for the health of the enemy marked.this skill ignores invulnerability.
energy: energy_random.gif energy_random.gif energy_random.gif
cooldown: 5
Class list: mental,Channeling

Spiritual barrier: Makes Daka invulnerable for one turn.
energy: energy_random.gif
cooldown: 4
Class list: tactic,instant


Titles:
at 40 pts -> ...ritualist...
at 90 pts -> The crazy...

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Name: Senzo Okachi
Health:100
Speciality: Disruption

Description: Okachi is the daymio of Senzu clan, he is a man very focused and the most powerful ninja of the village, he is known as the swordsman without arms, feared by the other villages, no ninja yet dared to challenge him.


Aparence: Okachi is 35 years old, bald and with a brand that involves the left eye like a tattoo, he has a red cloak(similar to the kurai) with black details, and eight sheaths on the back, where he keeps his eight sword.



Skills:

Soul control: Okachi control the soul of one enemy causing it to attack its own allies.Okachi stuns one enemy for 3 turns and during this time this enemy is invulnerable for teammates skill and one randon enemy except the marked one takes 20 piercing melee damage that ignores invulnerability. Retaliate soul is allowed on the character controlled during this time.
energy: energy_2.gif energy_2.gif
cooldown: 4
Class list: mental,Channeling


Animed swords: Okachi Gives life to his swords, causing them to attack the enemy. one enemy takes 15 ranged damage for 4 turns.
energy: energy_0.gif energy_random.gif
cooldown: 3
Class list: ranged,Aura


Retaliate soul: Okachi use their swords at maximum level in an enemy controlled by him, okachi deal 60 affliction damage and removes two randon energy. Soul control and Animed swords ends instantly.
energy: energy_0.gif energy_3.gif
cooldown: 0
Class list: mental,instant


Defense of the eight swords: Makes Okachi invulnerable for one turn.
energy: energy_random.gif
cooldown: 4
Class list: tactic,instant


Titles:
at 50 pts -> …controller…
at 100 pts -> ...of the eight swords


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Clan item:Spiritual ring of Senzo:Each time the user of the ring uses a mental skill ,is healed 10 points and gain a protector of 10 hit points ,This item can only be equipped by the Senzo clan.
energy: none
cooldown: none
Class list:passive,instant
  Posted on December 8, 2011 2:29 AM
#2
danahachai, The Radiant Saint

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Joined: February 5, 2011
I like the concept but may I ask, why does Sayuri's gender keep changing? From one skill or sentence it's him/he/his and the next it's her/she/hers! :huh
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  Posted on December 8, 2011 3:04 AM
#3
Brielga, Apprentice of the Tiger King

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Joined: March 9, 2010
danahachai wrote:

I like the concept but may I ask, why does Sayuri's gender keep changing? From one skill or sentence it's him/he/his and the next it's her/she/hers! :huh


reworked :blink

please answer the poll :amused
  Posted on December 8, 2011 4:25 AM
#4
danahachai, The Radiant Saint

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Name: Senzo Sayuki
Health:90
Speciality: Assassination

Description: Sayuki is a spy of Senzu clan, was trained from an early age, losing much of his childhood, her training was rigorous and difficult, over time she became a incredibly ninja and focused. She has the power to conjure up ghosts who always talk and help her,Sayuki also has her amazing glove inherited from her master.

Missed one.
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  Posted on December 8, 2011 4:35 AM
#5
danahachai, The Radiant Saint

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Gauntlet of Spirits and Spectral Blade are a bit OP as Gauntlet of Spirits is infinite, so I suggest making the duration of it 3-5 and/or increasing the cost by 1 random and duration.

Or just decrease the damage of Spectral Blade to 20-30. 40 is far too much.
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  Posted on December 8, 2011 12:48 PM
#6
Brielga, Apprentice of the Tiger King

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Joined: March 9, 2010
danahachai wrote:

Gauntlet of Spirits and Spectral Blade are a bit OP as Gauntlet of Spirits is infinite, so I suggest making the duration of it 3-5 and/or increasing the cost by 1 random and duration.

Or just decrease the damage of Spectral Blade to 20-30. 40 is far too much.


Gauntlet of spirits is a preparation that has no effect as of wings of firehawk or blessing of the Firehawk ,that gives protectors or burn the enemy, the wisest course is that it is infinite, a glove has no end.
spectral blade is her only potent attack , and the efect and cost are balanced(2 specifies energy) and has 1 turn cooldown
  Posted on December 15, 2011 2:21 AM
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#7
Darkamante, The Blue Rose

Contribution: 175 (155 + 20)
Joined: March 7, 2010
The ideia is great, the story and even the skills, just didn't like Daka being so attackless, one on one figth with him would be a pain, BUT, if another char can heal ki aflictions i would love to figth hana with him and jinsei *---*

9/10 to the chars and skills

10/10 to the story

0/10 for none of the chars be pepsi addicted :P

Final Grade: 9,5/10 (You all wish finals were like this hã?!)
My comment useless? Blame the great ideia of giving points to people who comment on forums ¬¬
  Posted on December 15, 2011 4:58 PM
#8
narutokurosaki, The Demonic Kid, Top 50 of PLS-3

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  Posted on December 17, 2011 2:16 AM
#9
fallen-legazy, Fugitive of the Military

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Joined: November 15, 2011
"is good man "good contribution"


:laugh :laugh :laugh :laugh
  Posted on December 17, 2011 3:20 AM
#10
danahachai, The Radiant Saint

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Brielga wrote:

(...)

Gauntlet of spirits is a preparation that has no effect as of wings of firehawk or blessing of the Firehawk ,that gives protectors or burn the enemy, the wisest course is that it is infinite, a glove has no end.
spectral blade is her only potent attack , and the efect and cost are balanced(2 specifies energy) and has 1 turn cooldown


Fair enough.
You've proved your point.
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  Posted on December 17, 2011 4:24 AM
#11
Brielga, Apprentice of the Tiger King

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Joined: March 9, 2010
danahachai wrote:

(...)

Fair enough.
You've proved your point.


^^
see my karasu and comment about skills :blink
http://forums.warofninja.com/9857/seishin-karasu/
  Posted on December 19, 2011 1:24 PM
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#12
caiotemon, The Innocent Dreamer of the Senboku

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Joined: March 4, 2010
seems fine ^^,should be in the game,9.5/10
  Posted on December 19, 2011 4:43 PM
#13
Brielga, Apprentice of the Tiger King

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Joined: March 9, 2010
Thank you, I'm very happy with your comment, I hope administrators think so too, and can implement my clan in the game

see too my karasu creation
http://forums.warofninja.com/9857/seishin-karasu-(the-black-prince-reworked-more-eas.../
  Posted on December 20, 2011 5:56 PM
#14
Gaboriero, Prisoner

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Joined: September 15, 2011
caiotemon wrote:

seems fine ^^,should be in the game,9.5/10


i agree , i loved the title and conceptions

make more clan ,its realy cool comment clan creations,takes too long to make new characters
  Posted on December 23, 2011 1:57 AM
#15
sammysowners, The Worthy Wolf of the Ancestors

Contribution: 241 (227 + 14)
Joined: March 7, 2010
9.7/10 :nuts :cheesy